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i absolutely love writing so i thought i would share all of my stories on here x i am only eleven so i am still improving so if there is anything to improve on my stories just tell me i would love to take in your information for my stories to improve! i hope you like my stories.

  • ayshxx
    5 years agoReply
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    LOVE IT!<3<3
    Rite to Life
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    -THIS IS A DYSTOPIAN- In a future, yet illusive world, society is divided into three factions. No one ever speaks of Faction One since the feud between people and the king. Nara is from Faction Two. She...
  • ayshxx
    5 years agoReply
    i love it !!!! its mind grabbing amazing . plz could you read my story the killer its new and if anythings wrong with it just say.
    My Name Is –
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    This was originally for the Valentine's Day competition. The information said to write about love, so I did. My character is 'Love', who stopped believing in itself long ago. Edit: Oh my goodyness!...
    R K Guron
    5 years ago
    Thanks, and sure I will :)
  • ayshxx
    5 years agoReply
    very good i am the same age as you and i think you have the same aim as me where you trying to improve to be a proffesional p.s you spelt finally wrong you put it as finaly not finally :)XX
    The girl picking apples
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    A story about a {another} girl called Alice who picks apples for a living on her Uncle's farm.Things change when she finds a young lion cub,lost and confused.... Things then get better as they become...
  • ayshxx
    5 years agoReply
    wow thats really good i just hope that i will be as good as you one day as i see you are 12 only one year older than me and this is how i want to get my writing to a very good standard.
    The Girl With And The Girl Without
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    Water. You see it everywhere, you use it, you waste it. Yet, you know, how precious it is. The front cover and the trailer are both Chetna's work. Please support her in the competition! She has done so...
    BlueBooks
    5 years ago
    Ow! You don't have any work up yet! Please write something, I can tell you are going to be a good writer! :DD
    ayshxx
    5 years ago
    i have posted something called the killer
    BlueBooks
    5 years ago
    Aw! Brilliant! I have left a comment. :)
  • ayshxx
    5 years agoReply
    that is really good. my favourite part is the second paragraph and i love the way you linked it with draco malfoy and the proffesors. (if you were trying to aim it that way) i luv it !!!! i just hope there is another chapter this chapter makes me want to read on just hope there is!!!
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    There is something about the girl that just so happened to show up at Hogwarts, with a voice like velvet and looks that could kill, but what is she hiding?
    noveltie
    5 years ago
    I'll make sure to look at it!(:
    ayshxx
    5 years ago
    ok when are you posting the next chapter
    ayshxx
    5 years ago
    i have posted it
    cxxx
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