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I am a student studying English Language and Literature at Oxford University.
My life is currently over saturated with era-defining, high-felutant epic poems and Renaissance masterpieces.
Therefore, I have chosen to return to Movellas in the hope of consuming some top-notch, premium One Direction fan-fiction bullshit.

  • The Ol' Razzle Dazzle
    I'm sorry, but just...*sigh* It's just not very good?
    Evil Dead
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    After finishing their long tour, One Direction, they're girlfriends, and a close friend decide to celebrate by going on a camping trip to the woods. In a game of truth or dare, Louis and Harry were forced...
  • The Ol' Razzle Dazzle
    I feel there could have been a better manipulation of adjectives and atmosphere: upon her departure, saying goodbye to her friends; upon her arrival at college; when meeting Harry for the first time, and when saying goodbye to her mum. It would have just made the first chapter much more emotive :)
    A Little To Late
    A Little To Late
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    Alex is going to college, were she is meeting a guy, with many tattoos, and looks cool. His name is Harry. she falls in love with him, but her new roommate is also in love with him.... Drama will definately...
    Citybabe
    4 years ago
    Yes i know what you mean. But its just because i think its a little boring when... You first meet him in like... Chapter 3 because.. I dont know... But then its like...a little lengthy.. But its just my opinion :) but you are probably right
    The Ol' Razzle Dazzle
    I'm just trying to be constructive; it's your story, after all :)
  • The Ol' Razzle Dazzle
    I hate to break it to you but...shouldn't the title 'A Little TOO Late'?
    A Little To Late
    A Little To Late
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    Alex is going to college, were she is meeting a guy, with many tattoos, and looks cool. His name is Harry. she falls in love with him, but her new roommate is also in love with him.... Drama will definately...
    Citybabe
    4 years ago
    haha... yes.. im sorry, im from Denmark, so im not that good at english.. ;)
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