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hi i am 14 years old and i live in wales, im doing really good in english and getting level 7s for my stories. i live with my mum and dad and my brother and sister.

  • ashpoundall
    5 years agoReply
    this is excecellent i only had to read the first page and it wants me to read on this is very descriptive aswell keep it up :)
    The Bully and The Bullied
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    We all hate bullies, don't we? But we have never given much thought to WHY exactly they like bullying. No one is born a bully - it's spite, anger, hatred and pain that creates one. *This is my entry for...
    Chetna
    5 years ago
    Thanks ashpoundall! :DD
  • ashpoundall
    5 years agoReply
    aww thank you and yes i will improve on that so thank you for that feedback. and yes i will look know :)
    A proud moment
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    This story is about somone who had a proud moment, a memory which they will never forget about because they did something that was brave.
  • ashpoundall
    5 years agoReply
    This is great!, it makes me wanna read on because in the first chapter there is some amazing catchy words, some of the stories you have produced are incredible keep writing this is a great!, thank you for commenting on the story i just wrote if you type ashpoundall in on the search box i have 1 more story and 1 diary entry.
    The School Girl Who Faced The Bully!
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    This is a story about a School Girl called Kessy, She lives on a boat, Travelling everywhere with her mum Katie and her dad Bouncer. They do everything together, They go fishing on Sunday's and Aquarium...
    3 SECOND LUKE
    5 years ago
    Thanks Ash and I will do that now x :)
    3 SECOND LUKE
    5 years ago
    =P yeah it's easier =P
    Kndlia you and your simplicity amazes me :') <3 xx
  • ashpoundall
    5 years agoReply
    Thank you so much it gives alot of confidence and how i can keep the way i write.
    A proud moment
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    This story is about somone who had a proud moment, a memory which they will never forget about because they did something that was brave.
    ashpoundall
    5 years ago
    thank you i wont :)
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