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I let stories take me where the authors want me to go. Let me explore other worlds. You write it, and I'll read it! Although, I am working on something currently...<3

  • Aryath
    3 years agoReply
    Sounds mysterious, continue please
    From EWWW To OHHH
    From EWWW To OHHH
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    Iris was always the ugly one, that is until she pulls an ugly duckling move over the summer when she visits her grandma.
  • Aryath
    3 years agoReply
    I haven't been on this site in a while, but when I finally decided to read some more off of it again, I was pleasantly surprised by your work. Just one piece of advice, try not to comment after every segment. I know that you know the reader will be confused, but that is how the best writers do it. Consider the confusion sort of like a hook or a bribe to the reader. The objective is to get them to want to keep reading and solve the mystery. You don't have to explain yourself after the segments. Be confident in what you write. That is all.
    Find Me.
    Find Me.
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    1 Objective. 1Universe. 60 Days. ~Find Me~
    Manderia
    3 years ago
    Thanks I was just really nervous because its my first movella and everything but your advice really helps :) Im glad you like it
  • Aryath
    4 years agoReply
    Love the story so far!
    Undeniable Love
    Undeniable Love
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    At first, love is unknown. It’s like a hurricane creeping up on you before it whisks you away into another world. But April doesn’t know that yet. She’s yet to find out. When April meets Cain, it just...
  • Aryath
    4 years agoReply
    I really like how Belle is often confused about what her feeling are for Finn. And I also like how differernt the personalities of the different characters are! Now you know that I like the story!
    Behind the Scenes
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    Belle Andrews is a movie star. She attends award ceremonies, dresses up for the red carpet, and best of all: stars as the leading lady in the new film, "The Haunted Hour." But what happens when Belle is...
    littlemiss111
    4 years ago
    Thanks Meg(: <3 Love youuu!!!! :)
    Aryath
    4 years ago
    Check my new story out... I am posting it right now <3
    littlemiss111
    4 years ago
    Yay!!! :) I'll look now!
  • Aryath
    4 years agoReply
    This is your best yet! I can feel it!
    Behind the Scenes
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    Belle Andrews is a movie star. She attends award ceremonies, dresses up for the red carpet, and best of all: stars as the leading lady in the new film, "The Haunted Hour." But what happens when Belle is...
    littlemiss111
    4 years ago
    I had the same feeling.. :) hmm. And thank you!! <3
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