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I love to write. I love to build new worlds brick by brick and create new lives for my people to live and fill them with happiness and sadness and struggles. I like to challenge them; to make them work for their goals. I love to imagine things and to share them with everyone. I love writing. I hope you do too.

A Small Act of Kindness

by , Friday December 16, 2016
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A Small Act of Kindness

The Magic of Bubble Wrap

What could possibly be better than a 50 meter roll of joy-filled, poppable stress relief?  


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  • Arianna Nightingale
    This is a fantastic story idea!! I love the idea of modern times colliding with history. Love, love, love! Just remember to use a descriptive vocabulary and lots of interesting verbs. I can't wait to read the rest! Thanks! :)
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    Amelia Davis is sucked back in time to the Civil war confederacy where Slavery is at large and she faces life changing decisions between love and loyalty and life and death. She is taken to Grave's hill...
  • Arianna Nightingale
    I don't think there has been a piece of writing that has so fluently conveyed my most true feelings on so many thing as creatively and masterfully as this beautiful glimpse of emotion. I only hope of writing something as excruciating perfect and exquisite as your story. I know that was wordy and maybe clique but I too believe that chiques are overrated. Also I am now thinking about not sending this comment but I think I will anyway. It's beautiful; keep writing!
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    "You're sitting on a red sofa, and it feels like you're sitting in the same pool of blood he died in. You're scared of dropping the camera, and the fear is curdling in your chest like it's long past its...
    Mirlotta
    2 years ago
    Thank you so much! :) I'm happy that this meant something to you. <3
  • Arianna Nightingale
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    Wow. This is beautiful. I have never read anything more true and passionate before. Thank you for gracing us with your words. Your writing isn't dying. It's flourishing.
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    Completely unedited, completely raw and truthful, completely written at 3:40am. I apologise.
    Arianna Nightingale
    @[SwimChick] @[RockNRollChic] Read this. Now. Right Now.
  • Arianna Nightingale
    Wow. I really enjoy this story so far! The blurb really pulled me in. My one suggestion would be to try and dwell more on what he is feeling try out some metaphors. They are my favorite writing tool. Hope this helps. Love the concept!
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    Wren Roth is a fourteen year old boy stuck in a demented society. The number one rule of The Fountain is no more than two children as the city is overpopulated and can't house no more than four in a family....
    Hannah_Writes0_0
    2 years ago
    Omg thanks i wasn't expecting comments on this thank you so much
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