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  • arch340
    1 years agoReply
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    Wow that was dark. That was some really great writing though. I like your repetition of his thoughts, he was pretty insane and you captured that very well.
    I did get a bit confused though. Did he kill Mary on purpose? I think he did but how/why? I'm pretty sure you're purposefully not making it explicit, but I wasn't sure.
    Anyhow, it was really good, I'd be happy to read some your other works!
    Do you think you could read my story and give some feedback? I'd appreciate it loads!
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    I’m an honest man, never hurt anybody. I pay my bills, I feed my cat, and I don’t stick my nose into other people’s business. None of it was my fault and neither is this.
    Mirlotta
    1 years ago
    Thank you! :D I'm not entirely sure myself, but the way I see it he killed Mary on purpose but can't really come to terms with the fact. I might change that a bit so people aren't confused.
    Thanks again, and I'd be more than happy to give some feedback on your entry! :)
    arch340
    1 years ago
    Thanks! Not to sound mean, but could you do it before the competition deadline? Just as it would be really useful for me to get someone else's opinion before the deadline. Thanks again!
    Mirlotta
    1 years ago
    Of course, I'll give it to you by tonight. :)
  • arch340
    1 years agoReply
    My entry, please give it a read :) any feedback greatly appreciated! P.S. Happy to do a feedback swap.
    Sacrifice"Now, my boy, be quiet. I know you have many questions, and you shall get your answers, but be patient for a bit longer. First, I have a story to tell...
    Mirlotta
    1 years ago
    I'd love to do a swap :)
    Fault and BlameI’m an honest man, never hurt anybody. I pay my bills, I feed my cat, and I don’t stick my nose into other people’s business. None of it was my fault and...
  • arch340
    3 years agoReply
    Does it have to be fanfiction? So with the same characters, world/setting?
    Or can it be a piece of creative writing inspired by a theme in one of the books, but with completely different characters, plot, setting i.e. a completely separate thing, but still inspired by one of the books?
    GeorgiaT
    3 years ago
    inspired by is fine.
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