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Don't even think about it...

  • Annika Ackerman
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    This is so powerful <3
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    "For once I know that I come in too many flavours for one fucking spoon." Aparupa Chakravarty. ©2016 (Cover credits: 'Garden of Melancholia' by Christian Schloe)
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    Thank you so much! :)

  • Annika Ackerman
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    You are so talented at poetry! I know you asked for feedback, but there's really nothing I can see wrong with this!
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    Please do not attempt to copy any of my work and claim it as your own, because it took a lot of time and effort to write this, and it would be horrible if somebody forged it. Thank you!
    Uniqua Niques
    3 years ago
    Awh, well thank you! I'm flattered that you can't find anything wrong with it :)
    Annika Ackerman
    3 years ago
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    Haha, you're welcome!
  • Annika Ackerman
    This is written so cleverly. I had shivers running down my spine by the first chapter! The ending is absolutely brilliant too, and I love the listing of all the companions. A random question: which was your favourite? :)
    The man who's second heart should be the man whose second heart.
    "And I always will be." I reassure her. should be "And I always will be," I reassure her.
    “Just... just promise that you’ll remember me.” She says should be "Just...just promise that you'll remember me," she says.
    Check through your work for the following mistake, as it occurs quite frequently: You put a full stop inside the speech marks, then outside the speech marks continue the sentence with 'she said' or the like. The full stop should be a comma, exclamation mark, or full stop because it is still part of the same sentence as 'she said'. Also, the 'she' of she said should be entirely lower case.

    Hopefully this helped!

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    *For the Doctor Who Fanfiction Competition* I know the pain of being left. So I’m sorry, Clara. I’m so sorry: now it’s your turn. Will the Doctor grant Clara's last wish and reveal the answer to...
    Uniqua Niques
    3 years ago
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    Yes, this helped me a lot, not only with this movella, but I can make sure I double check that with all my other writing too! Thanks for pointing that out, i probably wouldnt even have noticed otherwise! Thank you! I'm really pleased you enjoyed reading it too :D
    Uniqua Niques
    3 years ago
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    My fav Doctor was probably David Tennant and I loved Martha as his companion, who I think was probably underrated. She was the only companion that was strong enough to decide to leave him! What about you? Who was your favourite Doctor and companion? :D
    Annika Ackerman
    3 years ago
    No problem! Yes, Martha was very underrated - I think Donna is under appreciated too. My favourite Doctor is David Tennant. Christopher Eccleston was good, but is definitely overshadowed by David, and though I think Matt Smith is a good actor he was too balmy and similar to David. I like Peter Capaldi so far though, he seems brilliant! :D
    My favourite companion (oh my goodness, that's hard)... Definitely not Clara. She gets on my nerves, and I'm not even sure why!
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