FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 9 Jun 12Age 18Last online 4 years ago

Okay, so I'm thirteen years old and I live in England. My hobbies are dancing, basketball, I play a bit of guitar and, of course, writing :) <3

I joined this because although I would like feedback on my writing skills, I am afraid of being judged or people I know laughing behind my back. I feel to embarrassed to ask someone I know to read over my stories, in case they are no good at all. However I will accept constructive criticism :)

  • annabelle
    5 years agoReply
    Wow - this was brilliant! I hope there's more to come? Its really, really good!
    A Fashion Freakout
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    Rebecca is pretty and popular and she's had her eye on the Annis crystal platforms for the last few weeks. Monique has also had her eye on these particular pair of shoes. Watch them kick and claw at each...
    Jodie Angell
    5 years ago
    Thanks! And no, I wasn't planning to unless you think it's good enough for more? Feel free to check out my other stuff, especially Bloodlust and Trapped :D
    annabelle
    5 years ago
    Yeah! I think it definitely has the potential to turn into a whole story. It had a good storyline, characters and it made me laugh, too :)
    Jodie Angell
    5 years ago
    Awh great, I'll try to squeeze in another chapter soon, after my exams :D
  • annabelle

    mumbled "Why no ideas?"

    5 years agoReply
    I'm wondering why loads of stories I find are either about vampires, or include One Direction - not that they aren't good, but can no one come up with anything original anymore??
  • annabelle

    mumbled "thanks"

    5 years agoReply
    Thank you to everyone that has viewed (and liked) my first story! I am going to continue writing it but I would like some comments please to help me edit and publish the rest of it :)
  • annabelle

    mumbled "First post"

    5 years agoReply
    My name is Annabelle. I've never blogged before. I love writing stories of any kind and exploring new genres and ways of writing. I would like some feedback to improve my writing. I'm not at all confident which is why I would like to put some story ideas on here because I don't want people that I know to think I'm really bad and stuff, but I will take constructive criticism.
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