FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 4 Jan 13Last online 3 years ago

my name is Anna, I'm 14 and live in Scotland. I took an interest in writing when I was 6 years old and have loved it ever since. I hope some people will enjoy reading my pieces of writing. <3

  • Anna_Collette
    I love this! It is so special and so well written :D more people need to read this!
    Don't give up
    Don't give up
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    Please comment, tell me your views, what you think of it and any improvements. :)
  • Anna_Collette
    Wow, I love your style of writing very much! You have a brilliant, unique idea for a story here, and great, believable characters. Your writing made me want to keep reading, which I love about stories, and I can't wait until you add more. I love the range of vocabulary you have used, and I like how you describe everything with just the right amount of describing (if you know what I mean!:P). You have created Isabel really well - the audience want to sympathise with her because of the bullying. I just have a couple of points which could improve your writing further - I hope you don't mind.
    1. When you use speech, always make sure you have included punctuation between the last word and the closing speech marks.
    2. Check your use of 'your' and 'you're' as sometimes you have mixed them up.
    Overall I love your writing, so I have liked, favourited and become a fan :D
    Oh and I was just wondering, how old are you?
    Blue Is Not Bad
    Blue Is Not Bad
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    Isabel-Marie Davis made one of the biggest mistakes of her life. She dyed her hair bright blue to try and get noticed as the new girl at school. But instead of creating a good individual impression taunts...
    Lily Anna
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much! :D I'll fan you back! :D 13! :D I'll ready 'Unexpected' tomorrow because i have to go now, sorry. Is that alright? :D
    Lily Anna
    4 years ago
    *read.
    Anna_Collette
    4 years ago
    Ah okay!:) yes that's absolutely fine, thank you! :)
  • Anna_Collette

    mumbled "Hiiii"

    Hii guys, unfortunately I haven't been able to update my Movella, Unexpected, for a while - I've been so busy with school-work and things like that! Hopefully I will be adding to it more often now, though :) would anyone like me to read their Movella and give comments? x
  • Anna_Collette
    I would love to join! x
    Movellas Friendship Day
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    This happens once every month for people looking for people to be friends. We put different people together and that we don't think are already friends. They then fan each other and create a co-author...
  • Anna_Collette

    mumbled "New Movella"

    Hey guys! I have just published a new Movella, 'Echoes', and was wondering if I could have some feedback on it, as it's for school! Thank you! x
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