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  • angho079
    1 years agoReply
    You already reviewed my book but can I ask for some advice on how to write in third POV for future reference thanks.
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    暗い戦士
    1 years ago
    Certainly.
    The thing about third person point of view which I like the most is that even though you have to travel through the story with a certain character, you get to add a little more ambiguity with it, such as regarding what he or she might be thinking. Sure, the same can be achieved almosts as well with the first person, but then, it feels forced, as the whole point of the first person is to integrate the feeling of being in direct relation to the character, and experiencing everything that he or she does.
    As far as my advice goes, to get a good grasp of third person narrative, I'd suggest you observe. Observe what, exactly, you might ask? Well, everything.
    Being a third person is all about being the spectator. Learn to observe, analyse, and then try and compare it to how you feel about something upon acting like the first person.
    Another great thing to do is to write a diary entry about what you do daily, but it put it across in third person.
    Example:- Instead of:
    "I went to the park today. I hung out with my buds."
    Write:
    "XYZ went to the park today, where she hung out with her friends."
    Something that like that should help induce an observant tone to your writing. It won't be apparent, but it'll gradually show in your writing.
    Hope that helps for now.
    -KuraiSenshi
    angho079
    1 years ago
    Thank you so much!
  • angho079
    1 years agoReply
    Are you going to add new characters?
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  • angho079
    1 years agoReply
    Can you please review my book
    The Boys Next Door2 best friends, Jaelyn and Jenna move to New York , to live out their dreams together. When they move in to their new apartment, they don't know what they...

    P.S it is very cliche and cheesy
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    angho079
    1 years ago
    Also can you interview me? Thanks
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