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“I don't mind being burdened with being glamorous and sexual. Beauty and femininity are ageless and can't be contrived, and glamour, although the manufacturers won't like this, cannot be manufactured. Not real glamour; it's based on femininity.”
― Marilyn Monroe

Normal girl with a wild imagination

  • Amylovesoreos
    Thank you for your review...as you can see the character I picked to play her has a nose ring. I wrote in the story that she tried to get his attention by getting good grades and so on that was just more to understand the character's story....Yellow is fine because there is nothing explicit that I've written...To be honest every story is cliché it just depends on the writer and maybe it's not your type of story but it's definitely not 2.7...and they where only 6 chapters up so the story would have gone a different way but every story starts off a little cliché...but thank you :)
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    I'm going to be a little harsh on here, if you don't want that, don't ask to get your movella reviewed. There will be things I am checking you on Spelling Grammar Story line. If it is a fan-fiction then...
    Amylovesoreos
    4 years ago
    That wasn't my intention but anyway glad you gave feedback so thank you :)
    sophie troy
    4 years ago
    I'm sorry to be harsh but I just want to help you grow as a writer
    Amylovesoreos
    4 years ago
    its okay...its your review page lol thanks again.
  • Amylovesoreos
    Rock a bye baby :) thank you
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    I'm going to be a little harsh on here, if you don't want that, don't ask to get your movella reviewed. There will be things I am checking you on Spelling Grammar Story line. If it is a fan-fiction then...
  • Amylovesoreos
    I love your writing my word :)xx update soon
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    When you lose someone you care about nothing else matters in the world; your world becomes one big black hole, you lose all the happiness in your body, mind, soul and spirit. Hayden Rivers was always...
    Janesmiles
    4 years ago
    Thank you :)x
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