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  • alovelylily
    4 years agoReply
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    Very tantalizing imagery. You're definitely on you way to a great story. I will recommend this to others!
    When Infinity Ends
    When Infinity Ends
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    Camp Sabalay had always been just another summer camp. A fun, but not life-changing and adventurous, but not dangerous place for teens. But at Camp Sabalay, year of 2014, weeks 2-3, everything will change.
    Em&Em
    4 years ago
    thank you!!!dont forget to favourite if you haven't already!
  • alovelylily
    4 years agoReply
    I don't know if this is simply stream of consciousness writing but the ellipse and the lack of syntax are kind of distracting. I could see a teenager writing this in a diary so the tone seems appropriate.
    life with boys
    life with boys
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    a girl who lives with loads of boys..................
    kkhihihi
    3 years ago
    your horrible no effence
  • alovelylily
    4 years agoReply
    It's a very poignant piece. I just think it may come off as trying to be too dramatic.
    Poetry of Dark
    Poetry of Dark
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    This is a poetry of dark poems, which of some of you may relate to.
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