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in my writes the theme has always been human relations....the sensitivity of the subject is dealt very carefully...the narration can literally put the reader like in that place with the characters...

  • aishwarya
    5 years agoReply
    very nicely put evrything.......it was like quoting the essentials u need to exist...overall nice poem
    A way to survive
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    Agnes..
    5 years ago
    Thank you so much!
  • aishwarya
    6 years agoReply
    captive is the extreme form of love, when someone loves you so much and you owe him so much that at one point you feel trapped. a person can control the other by allowing him do what he wants but he should know that he still is not free he is allowed to do what he is doing. i mean he is working some one else's wish. this feeling that you are captive and you cant get out because you can not pay him back is killing. the narrator here is ready to give up his dreams desires emotions everything to get out and on the other hand he knows that he cant live without his lover. he is just so dependent. this poem proves that even love can hurt.
    CAPTIVE...the other face of love
    CAPTIVE...the othe...
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    this poem is how extreme love can be that it can make you hurt and helpless.
  • aishwarya
    6 years agoReply
    drama queen is awesome. it soo dramatically explains the authors feelings. the selection of words is just so right....good work keep posting
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    aditiboo
    6 years ago
    Thank you :)
  • aishwarya

    mumbled "the breakdown"

    6 years agoReply
    well what to write about this poem. readers can easily imagine my state of mind while writing it. this poem describes the post break up feelings. the protagonist is gender less. i did so in order to let everyone relate to the poem. its the situation where the protagonist is sitting in a dark room with in the light of a candle. he/she is broken at heart and feel as if he/she will collapse any second. the last few lines of the poem are my favorite as they speak about the reality of life in it naked form. rest you will know when you all will read it. its all about emotions which can only be felt and not explained.
  • aishwarya

    mumbled "untouched lonliness"

    6 years agoReply
    when i wrote the poem "untouched loneliness" it was the real feeling of being alone but yet being happy. that time i realised that being alone does not necesarily mean unhappiness. the persoal space which you share only with yourself is so divine that i can compare it with godliness. it may sound like an exaggerated version but it is real that i keep this feeling above spirituality....or in ways maybe this is true spirituality. its like meeting the god that reside inside you and now you are so comfortable with it that you want to be alone with yourself. and you do not want to share your lonliness with anyone. its like reaching a level which is above the yearning of someone's company, which is way above the yearning to be heard. what can be more lovely that you can hear yurself, compose yourself...its just you and your soul....that is my untouched lonliness.
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