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  • Ahmed
    5 years agoReply
    There once was a girl and everyone at school had a china doll! So she asked her mother if she could have a china doll, and her mother said yes. The next day the girl and her mother went to the toy shop down the road, and the girl went to pic a doll. She looked at a doll with ruby red eyes and long black hair and thought :
    " nobody at school has one like this!" so she went up to her mother and said that she wanted that one and her mother bought it for her. The same night the girl put her doll on the landing and said goodnight to her mother, father and her brother, after a while she heard somebody in the kitchen! So she went downstairs to see who it was and there she found the china doll with a knife in its hand!! The girl screamed, ran upstairs to her room and hid under the covers, then she heard the doll comin up the stairs and as the doll was climbing the stairs it was chanting:
    "I'm on the first step, i'm on the second step, i'm on the third step! ect." When it got to the landing it said:
    " I'm going to kill your brother!" The doll went out of the room and went to find the other rooms, and the girl went into her brothers room and what she found was very disturbing! Her brothers body was hanging out of the window and his head was hanging from the light!!!!! The girl ran back to her room and hid under the covers again, she then heard the doll say:
    "I'm going kill your mother and father!" as the doll went to find the girl, the girl went into her mothers room and found: her mothers head stuck to her mirror and her body stuck to the door + her fathers head nailed to the wall and his body in the closet!!! The girl ran as fast as she could to her room as she did that the doll followed her, the girl hid under the covers! She heard the doll say:
    "Now i'm going to kill YOU!!" The next day the police found the bodies of the family but the doll was no-where to be found!!!!
    Jordan Philips
    5 years ago
    Hi! Thanks for entering the competition! I wanted to let you know that this entry hasn't counted. To enter, you have to upload a new movella (movellas.com/book/edit/movella) and then click the green button in the corner of this page that says Join This Competition. Good luck!
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