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  • agb_music
    2 years agoReply
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    It is an interesting start. Very creative. The story elevated a little quickly I realized, but I love the idea. I also noticed a few punctuation errors but it is a very good start to a story with lots of potential.
    The girl who wore leather
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    In the village of Confrontare children the age of six get to pick a dragon egg as their companion for life.
    Sapphire Silver Moon
    Thank you very much, I am working on the grammar.
    agb_music
    2 years ago
    Your welcome! It is probably better than I could have done.
  • agb_music
    2 years agoReply
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    It is very creative. You are very descriptive and it reminded me of all of the ancient myths I've heard. I must say the ending did surprise me a little bit. But great job.
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    "Now, my boy, be quiet. I know you have many questions, and you shall get your answers, but be patient for a bit longer. First, I have a story to tell you. I hear you love stories. I’m sure you won’t have...
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