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  • AdventurousWriter
    Oh my gosh!! Love these new chapters. I was so into it. My heart was racing from the excitement you made so aparant. I think it is safe to say that you have a great way of showing the emotions in ways that not many writers are able to do.
    Gift: The Rebellion
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    Rory Stone has a Gift, and the whole world wants to see. Rory Stone felt that his life was perfectly normal, the days spent with his best friend Towlen even managed to make it vaguely bearable, even...
    TheFuzz
    3 years ago
    Aw thank you so much! New ones up soon! ^.^
  • AdventurousWriter

    Needing feedback

    Hello everyone! I am working on a story right now. It is called .Justice," and is about bullying, with a bit of a technological twist to it. I only have two chapters, but I am working on the third one now. After all, writing does take time. I have another movella called "The Freak Show" which I have put on hold, because it find it difficult to relate to it. Another movella is a short story. I would really appreciate it if anyone who reads this, could check out what I have written for "Justice." When you do I would really like some feedback. That is the main reason I am writing this. Let me know if you notice any grammatical errors, or tell me if you feel that I should change something. If you want, you could even say something nice about it. If you love it let me know. It makes me want to keep writing. Also, if you want, you can check out the other two, and let me know about what you think. I really want some feedback. Thank you for reading this article.
    newbeatofheart
    3 years ago
    hey could you check out a really crappy trailer I made
    I want to know if anyone who like reading it or
    want to see what happens
    ~
    link below to watch
    http://studio.stupeflix.com/v/opVj698ojd..
    thelarrysquad
    3 years ago
    One Night Stand (16+) <>Jade, just a girl with a normal, quite boring, life. At least, that's till Harry comes into her life. What was supposed to be a 'One night stand' turned...

    Would appreciate it if you would read my story and maybe give me some feedback !

    Nora .x
  • AdventurousWriter
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    This is a very creative and well thought out storyline. This idea could take you far. It would definitely be a "novel" I would read. AMAZING!!
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    Aeryn Miller has found herself at her dream job after weeks of arduous training and four consecutive days of examinations at the Orbus Practical Research Facility. When Aeryn discovers Project (Name Pending),...
    TheFuzz
    3 years ago
    Thank you! :)
  • AdventurousWriter
    Hi. It's me again. I am still anxious to read the rest of the chapters. I know your probably busy, but if you could upload the rest of the chapters, that would be amazing. :-)
    Gift: The Rebellion
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    Rory Stone has a Gift, and the whole world wants to see. Rory Stone felt that his life was perfectly normal, the days spent with his best friend Towlen even managed to make it vaguely bearable, even...
    TheFuzz
    3 years ago
    Hey, realllyy sorry about that, i know i said i would :/
    Just uploaded two more chapters, more coming soon! :)
  • AdventurousWriter
    Hello anyone that reads this story. I am currently working on another story for the time being. If you would like, you can check out my other story, "Justice" It has a noose as the cover.
    JusticeIn this realistic yet unbelievable story, Parker (A genius teen who is great with technology) and Mark (A harshly bullied teen), who are best friends,...

    That is the link. I would really appreciate the extra views.
    The Freak Show
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    The story is about a man that is abducted one night after work. He is supposed to be part of a show where unspeakable things happen. Throughout the story he is thriving to survive and finally get rid of...
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