FemaleUnited StatesMember since 14 Sep 14Age 17Last online 3 years ago

Hey y'all!!! So I guess a bit bout me... I... BREATHE AIR!!! I know, so special. Guess wat!? You can talk anime to me! Cuz, I too watch em. I also LOVE horror stories!! <3 and I love to draw and write! :D

  • Adriannah
    3 years agoReply
    Love the update!!! :D I can't wait for the update! :D
    Death Chanter
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    I'm redoing the whole thing...
    Lazy Writer
    3 years ago
    I'm glad you liked it! I'm already half way through the next page/chapter/whatever
  • Adriannah
    3 years agoReply
    It's pretty good yet, maybe it's just me, but everything is going a bit too fast. And I can't really tell what's going on.
    Death Chanter
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    Adriannah
    3 years ago
    Yes, make rack scene a slow yet some what fast paced. Details are extraordinary important because it'll make the reader imagine everything in their head and it'll give em the reactions you'll want! :D For example: when that lady came in, she kinda just randomly appeared. I dunno, make a blinding light, or any other affect. Or maybe say she appeared like a ghost, out of no where.
    Lazy Writer
    3 years ago
    Thanks for the replies! I'll work on it.
    Lazy Writer
    3 years ago
    Well, here is the new edited version. I added another chapter as the intro and rephrased a little, also added more description. What do you think?
    By the way what did you like about the old and new versions not just what's wrong so I can know what to keep.
  • Adriannah

    mumbled "NOOOOOOOO"

    3 years agoReply
    Urg! *falls dramatically* I HAVE SERIOUS WRITERS AND DRAWERS BLOCK!!!
    BookloverAyame-chan
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    Totally sucks, when I have writers black, I try to get into something new. Like starting a new show or book, or just try out something different. It's helps for me sometimes..... or I can't stop thinking about it and totally stress. Lol XD
    Adriannah
    3 years ago
    Bwahahaha!!! XD I actually was thinkin bout writin' a new thing. XP THANX CHU!!!! =3=
  • Adriannah

    mumbled "Illustrator"

    3 years agoReply
    Great at drawing? Know anyone great at drawing? Have an open schedule?
    Then PLEASE consider this request!

    I am writing a book called "SURVIVE NOW". I have just published the first chapter so you should know what it's about.
    I am a pretty decent artist, but I want a different style for my book. Plus I don't have the most flexible time.
    I will give you information PRIVATELY about everything so you can draw it, and/or get ideas.

    If you are interested or know anyone interested please contact me at: viralzx8@juno.com

    The most wanted style is anime but if you can't draw it and you still want to become illustrator then please still send in your design. I may like it.
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