FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 20 Apr 12Age 21Last online 5 years ago

  • abbie434
    5 years agoReply
    this is really lovely, so emotional x i love that you've made her realistic, not falsely peppy about everything x
    Before I Die
    Before I Die
    252
    21.3k
    418
    This is my entry for the 'love' competition for Valentine's Day. Lexa suffers with terminal cancer. She knows she hasn't got long to live. She has no one to live for anyway. She is left spell-bound...
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    awh glad you liked it!! i was over the moon for winning!!xx
  • abbie434
    5 years agoReply
    'he crushed his lips to mine', now what novel have i read that in before?x oh yeah that would be yours :Lx speaking of embrace have you done much more editing? i havn't read it in a while x
    Paradise
    Paradise
    9
    3453
    36
    Lola is dead, but her afterlife is more than what she could have asked for. This was a request by Evangilina, I hope you like it :D<3
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    haha I know but i was cba to think of anything different :L! I have done some more editing but not much, about half way through, but thats just reading over it and making sure it sounds okay, not changing any sentence structures, it's really hard to think from an objective perspective whilst reading your own work...i really need your help tbh!!x
  • abbie434
    5 years agoReply
    you sick, sick child :L x you had a really perverse imagination x
    Spine Tinglers
    Spine Tinglers
    9
    3606
    33
    This is a short story I wrote when I was 12 haha! It got published in a book called Spine Tinglers: A collection of Ghost stories :) I hope you like it!
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    haha thanks abbie! you reading everything are you :L?x
    abbie434
    5 years ago
    yes i most certainly am x just read paradise, very cute x
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    haha! I barely tried with that! I was bored and thought why not haha! thank!x
  • abbie434
    5 years agoReply
    i know i shouldn't, but ' what would these...these terrorists do to me' made me laugh x that is so typically jodie :Lx you've got a like from me :D x
    Dude: My Sexuality
    Dude: My Sexuality
    106
    9196
    186
    -entry for the diary competition- Luke, a teenage boy who's world is currently upside down, is faced with the challenge of accepting who he is. This challenge is made incredibly difficult for him when...
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    Haha, I was watch The Proposal whilst writing it, let's say Ryan Reynolds was my inspiration, he's so funny! Thank you!! Could you read Before I Die if you've got time?x
  • abbie434
    5 years agoReply
    i really like it jodie x only criticism (this is really petty, but you know im picky :L) - 'wearing her blank expression......maintaining a fake smile' - can you have a blank face and maintain a smile at the same time? but other than that its great :D x also more gore please, i love blood and guts x (abbie lewis, just in case you didn't already guess)
    Bloodlust
    Bloodlust
    84
    7059
    139
    In this town, a woman was expected to entertain the men of the night with her blood, her body. She was not her own person; belonging to them like a piece of furniture. As far as they were concerned, her...
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    There you go, changed it, do you think it's better?xx
    abbie434
    5 years ago
    yep, definitely x
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    awh good! thanks ab!! x
Loading ...