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    Would love to see some of these submitted to re:view

    4 years agoReply
    I would love to see some of these movellas submitted to re:view (digital arts journal). The first issues is seeking paid submissions now! Check out the group page for more info: movellas.com/en/group/detail/20130222015..

    Entries can count on being read and possibly reviewed by other entrants.
  • 94931355
    4 years agoReply
    One (or several) of these chapters would be an awesome submission to re:view (an online digital arts review)! Issue 1 is accepting paid submissions now, check out the group page: movellas.com/en/group/detail/20130222015..
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    This was originally for the Valentine's Day competition. The information said to write about love, so I did. My character is 'Love', who stopped believing in itself long ago. Edit: Oh my goodyness!...
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    4 years agoReply
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    Nice handling of rhyme, I like it. It's hopeful, but in a "light in the darkness" sort of way rather than over-happy. If anything, I would say that the punctuation hinders you a bit.
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    WriterMan
    4 years ago
    Thank you very much for your feedback. I will give it a read through, and see if I can improve the punctuation.
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