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  • 3spikeyshark
    Swapit Name : 3spikeyshark
    The thing
    There were two young boys named Trevor and Will. They spent most of their summer holiday hanging around town, looking things to do.

    One hot August night, the boys were sitting on the fence by the main road.There was a cornfield just across the road. Suddenly Trevor spotted something in the field. In the darkness, it was difficult to make out,but he thought it looked like some kind of weird animal.

    He nudged his friend and pointed in the direction of the strange looking figure. Will said that he could see it too. He wasn't sure, but mysterious thing seemed vaguely human. The next thing they knew, the thing was gone. T

    he boys craned their necks and scanned the field with their eyes. Out of the blackness, came the thing. It slowly walked over to the edge of the field before disappering again.
    Treevor and Will looked at each other, puttled.
    "What was that?" asked Will,
    "I have no idea" replied Trevor

    No sooner had hhe said that than Trevor felt a clammy hand on his shoulder. He turned around and found himself staring directly into the hidcous face of the thing. He let out a yell of terror and surprise.

    The rotting skin on the things face was coming off off in places, reavealing the bone underneath. For a ,o,emt,it just stared silently at Trevor with its dark sunken eyes. Then, it suddenly grabbed hold of his arm. Trevor felt its fingernails dig into his flesh as he wriggled out out of its grasp.
    The two boys leaped off the fence and ran down the road, screaming in horror. They didn't stop running until they reached their homes. They tried to tell their parents and friends about the thing they had seen that night, but nobody believed them.

    When Trevor woke up the next morning, the scratches on his arm were still there. After a few days, they got worse and worse.Trevor got sick and his parents took him to see a doctor. After examining his arm, the doctor told the boy it was infected and gave him some pills to take.
    Unfortunately, Trevor's condition got worse and worse. The infection spread to his entire arm and it wasnt long before his flesh was rotting and falling off. He was taken to hospital but no matter what the doctors did, no treatment seemed to work. The infection spread thoughout his whole body. Trevor was confined to bed and started to wasted away.
    It seemed liked he was beyond help and as the days went by, he grew worse and worse. His parents could only sit at his bedside and cry asthey watched their beloved son slowly rotting away before their eyes.
    On the day that Tervor finally passed away, will came to the hospital to vist him. When the boy walked into the hostpital room and saw Trevor lying in bed, he was horrified. Hiss friend looked exactly like the thing.
    Jordan Philips
    5 years ago
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