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12. Unforgettable - Love Story - @Anne Onymous

I love this! 

Ok, I will start by saying that I love your characters and I think that they are well made. They are all interesting and, personally if I had met them in real life then I would hate one one of them, that would be Sierra. I'm not sure why but people like her I can't deal with them. I also like that when you are writing in Quinn's pov you make Joseph the bad guy, but when you are in his pov you make us realize that he is in pain. 

I also like that you are describing everyone and giving us clear visuals on their looks and personalities. It was also good that you make everything like highschool is like now and not a nicer version of it. I like that you make t seem like you have a plot line, if you don't it's fine because this is really good for writing without a clear idea in mind. 

I see that you are good with grammar and punctuation. If you have ever read any of my writing you can tell that I'm not good, so I appreciate that there are people who are good at that kind of stuff. 

I honestly cant even see anything wrong with this story so I'm only going to put pros down, haha. 

 

Pros- Your characters descriptions, your punctuation, your grammar, your plot line(so far), and your high school visual

 

I forgot to say this but I put this down as a bookmark so I could read it later, but I forgot it and I realized after you said something that I had it there. I love this and hope to read more! 

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