Zireee's Story Review (CLOSED)

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17. Zandora's Life by Zandora daughter of Hades

My Opinion:

This is good! You have some work to do though.

When I read it, everything feels like it's being rushed. You can be a little bit more detailed on what's going on. 

You don't seem to have any spelling or punctuation errors which is good.

The only issue with it to me is if you were more detailed in the story and it didn't seem like it was rushed, but other than that, it's a really good story and I can't wait for more!

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️

-Zireee

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