Zireee's Story Review (CLOSED)

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13. Runic- Sempiternal Solo by jubjubird


My Opinion:

Woah...

I didn't finish the first chapter because I know you're waiting for a response and also because I needed to say this...

I LOVE IT!!

I only read the first three chapters and I'm already in love. Your style of writing is my favorites. I call those writers Soft Dancers. You're writing reminds me of a girl in a prairie field. She's dancing and swaying to the wooshing sound of the prairies and moving at the pace of the prairies as wind goes by. The sun is out and it's not hot, it's one of those days where it's perfect. And she's just swaying.

Your writing makes me want to go to sleep. And not in a bad way. It needs to be an audiobook so then I can play it a night. Then I can play winding softly blowing in the background as the audiobook is playing. 

It's so good and I'm definitely going to finish it. It's so soft...

I hope you continue it because it's incredible!

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

-Zireee

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