Zireee's Story Review (CLOSED)

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21. Runic- Aeonian Overture by jubjubird


My Opinion:

So, I only read one chapter because your chapters are long, and also because I'm currently in class. I knew you were waiting for the review so I decided to just review based on the first chapter.

As usual, your style of writing really amazes me. If you've heard of the movie, Bright, your book kind of reminds me of the movie. If you haven't seen it, you're missing out! It's on Netflix, and if you don't have Netflix, just watch it on a movie website.

I love soft writers. They soothe me and your flow of writing really soothes me. I've been pretty hectic lately, and this story sort of calmed me down, lol.

I didn't find any errors. One thing I'd recommend is to try not to make your chapters so long. If I read this on a busy day, I probably wouldn't have finished the chapter, but I finished it anyway. But if you feel like making the chapter long, then go ahead! I'm not going to tell how to write.

Keep up the great work!

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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