Zireee's Story Review (CLOSED)

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75Comments
3746Views
AA

6. Me and Him and a Bit of Music by XxAlaynaxX


My Opinion:

I'm really enjoying this story. At first in the beginning, I was confused on what was going on, but then I started to get used to it. Your style of writing, I call it the "Quiet Writer". It's calm and the flow to me seems smooth. It's not a bad thing, I really like those types of writers, lol. You do have some punctuations errors, but those can be easily fixed. One thing you can do to make your story more interesting is put the title and your pen name on your cover. It'll be more appealing to others and catch their eyes. This is just a suggestion. Continue with the story, I really like it. I also gave it a like and a favorite.

-Zireee

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