Zireee's Story Review (RE-OPENED)

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19. Innocent by Amaan.s_official

My Opinion:

I thought this was very nice. I honestly don't have a whole lot to say about it because my mind is cloudy with what's going on right now in my life. Usually, I'd have something way better to say about your books, especially because I love them, but I don't really have much at the moment.

I will say that I like your poetic flow. At first, I didn't notice the rhymes, but then it started to click.

If your friend, Haris, saw this, I'm sure he'd know that you're one hell of a friend.

I admire you, Amaan, and I'm looking forward to your future poems. I like reading them!

I didn't seem to find any errors, so you're in the clear. 

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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