Zireee's Story Review (CLOSED)

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5. Calling Ben by Anne Onymous


My Opinion:

I really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter! You do switch back from past tense and present tense, though. You should probably stick with one because it throws the story off just a little. But other than that, I'm reallyyy liking this story. I liked it and favorited it! 

-Zireee

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