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5. The Missing Ring

The Missing Ring

~I really like the concept that you are going with, and the overall idea

~There were only a few spelling errors, but you could just briefly read through and correct them

~ I think Joey is really awesome, and I liked how you developed her as a character

~ You could definitely take your stories in multiple directions

~ It keeps your readers guessing of what is going to happen

~I would recommend this story to people who are looking for a mystery story to read!!
 

 

~Izzy.The.Potato

 

 

 

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