Book reveiws

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Title: Suicide Mystery

Author: Elizabeth Yaj

Chapters: All

Genre: Mystery

I feel that the plot could move a little slower for my preference, but that is an authors choice. Your character could be a little more developed, but if you are continuing, I can see development later on. Your grammar was really great but you tended to leave the "ing" out of words. I also really liked the literature questions signaling a new chapter. Also, just a question, but why did some people say things in quotation marks and some had their bolded name and then their sentence?

Plot 9/10

Character development 9/10

Grammar 9.5/10

Overall 9.16/10

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