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Title: Harry potter truth or dare extreme

Author: Harrypotterhead2016

Chapters: All

Genre: Harry Potter

This is really good. I already read it and I loved reading it again. Overall, your plot was really cool. Your characters weren't in need of being developed but Lola was interesting. Grammar was good but your "I" s were not capitalized. Also, you would have sentences like '"...please" I said.' This is grammatically incorrect. Even if punctuation is inside the quotation marks, you still need to start a new sentence. Other than that, great job!

Plot 10/10

Characters 10/10

Grammar 8/10

Overall 9.3/10

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