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3. SnowPotato_ - A Night at St. Scanett

This was only a chapter long, but it definitely gave a good atmosphere from the word go! You told me about thoughts of elongating it, and completing it- and I would wholeheartedly want you to do that! 

I couldn't spot any mistakes, really. It was very great all around. 

The atmosphere matched the supernatural/vampire edge to it. 

I really, really enjoyed reading this- I hope you make it longer!

(Sorry this was short, it was only a chapter!)

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