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9. Jordiewatters - Addicted

Straight off the bat, I can tell that I'm going to enjoy reading more outside of my review store. It seems that you've put a lot of time and effort into writing the few chapters you have up.

The first thing that hits me is the amazing description you manage to create just by the choice of words. You create the most wonderful metaphors and descriptive lines right from the prologue, and I love it.

The next thing I can think of is that your chapters are so in depth and they move at just the right pace at just the right time. 

The only thing I would say is to maybe give it a more through once over before publishing it. In order to pick out mistakes, try putting it through Google Translate and making it read it out to you (not in a different language) and it'll help you pick out any spelling mistakes or even if you're missing some words or if something doesn't make sense.

There's not a whole lot to review but I'm positive about the outcome already!

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