The Abandoned Amusement park

I never liked clowns I always hated them, they just scare me and they are terrifying. My boyfriend talked me into going to an abandoned carnival. I didn't like the idea but I went along with him, it was creepy, I felt like something bad was going to happen. Tell you this much that bad thing did happen and worst thing are yet to come to my life.


1. Chapter 1

We all threw our hats up in the air, and cheered we were finally done with school. I picked up my hat and we all walked out, my boyfriend Isaac picked me up bridal style and I couldn't be any happier. We found Isaac's family and they were waiting for us. Me and Isaac stood beside each other for pictures. I lived with my aunt but she was always drunk and never showed up to any of my choir concerts or even my graduation. She didn't care anyways it doesn't matter.

"Leo get a little closer." I nodded and handed Isaac's dad my things and wrapped my arm around Isaac's waist and his arm wrapped around mine like a snake. I smiled and there was a flash of light off of their phones I handed them my phone and they took pictures on there. Me and Isaac broke apart and he gave me a kiss. I smiled and took a selfie, I was happy and excited.


I  walked in the house and my Aunt was passed out on the couch with bottles around her. I sighed and picked up the bottles and dumping what alcohol was in there. I pulled my curly hair up in a ponytail then eerie music started to play. I believe it was 'Pop goes the weasel.' I slowly turned around and the TV was showing a commercial, it was the old amusement park, the one that was abandoned. I quickly texted Isaac.

Leo: Hey is your TV playing eerie music?

Isaac: yeah it just came out of nowhere

Leo: Kinda scared me cause I was dumping things.

Isaac: do you wanna check it out

Leo: Idk cause I really don't like clowns or anything like that.

Isaac: It's abandoned no one is going to be there, you will be fine.

Leo: Okay fine I'll go but if we die I blame you.

Isaac: we won't die I'll see ya around 10 we're having a BBQ.

Leo: Okay see ya

He stopped texting me and I walked up to my room, I got on a black dress that hit my thighs and I sat in bed opening my mail.  


It was 10:30 and Isaac's car finally pulled up, I smiled and stood up. I walked over to his car and I got in.

"Hey sorry for being late."

"No, no it's okay I figured you were busy." He nodded. He pulled out of my drive way and we went to the other side of town to the abandoned amusement park. We got out and I didn't like what I saw, there were kids on the fence.

"I-Isaac." I said grabbing his hand. He looked at it and shrugged.

"They're just decorations."

"If you say so."

He went over the gate before I did, I crawled over and my dress got caught on something sharp. Isaac helped me and I adjusted my converse. I grabbed his arm and we walked around, soon there was lights on and music started to play. It was 'Pop goes the weasel' I held on to Isaac a little tighter, I didn't really think that this old place had power. We stopped at a stall and there was a wooden chest and Isaac jumped over the counter and walked over. He sighed when he tried to open it. I climbed over and walked over to him and handed him a bobby pin.

"Here this should help." I said kneeling beside him. He smiled and took it and opened it, there was a small box. I grabbed it while he pulled out a stuffed bear. I dusted off the box and it was black and white stripes. It was pretty old looking, I looked on top and it said laughing jack in the box. I felt arms wrap around my waist.

"What is that?"

"It was in the wooden chest, it says laughing jack in the box," I shook it but it didn't make any noise. "But I don't think that there's anything in it." Isaac shrugged.

"I don't know."

"I might keep it."

"Okay I mean it doesn't have an owner. I thought that you were scared of clowns."

"I am but I don't think that there is anything in it." He nodded and helped me over the counter, we walked around me and we found a carousel. I got up on it and Isaac wasn't behind me, I looked around and I didn't see him.

"Isaac!" I yelled, there was no answer. I got down and started to walked around trying to find him, he never really left my side. I kept the box close to me. I yelped when I was pulled into a tent. I looked at who it was and it was Isaac. “What the hell? You scared-” Before I could finish he put his hand over my mouth.

“Shh he’s going to hear you.”


“The black and white clown,” He sighed. “Listen to me carefully, make a run for the gate I’ll be right behind you.” I nodded and soon all the lights went out. I yelped and Isaac squeezed my hand. “Go now.”

I made a run for it tripping a few times, but I made it there. I stopped and caught my breath my chest tighted up. I guess I should've brought my inhaler. I turned around and I didn’t see Isaac. Oh no! I put the box by the gate and walked back I used the flashlight on my phone to look around. After a few minutes my phone beeped and it died. You have got to be kidding me. Soon the music started up again, this really creeped me out.

I walked into a tent and the lights suddenly came back on. How? How does this old place have electricity? I looked around and my eyes grew wide and my heart broke, when I saw Isaac on the ground in a pool of blood, I held my stomach and puked. I found a stick and walked over to my boyfriend body hoping he was just pulling a prank on me. I saw that his stomach was cut open and you touched him with the stick when his guts along with candy came pouring out. I have a weak stomach and puked again. Tears were streaming down my face. Hoping that this was all just a joke I called out.

“Very funny Isaac you got me this time.” I said with tears still steaming down my face. I didn’t want to believe it. Till I got a cold chill Isaac’s body wasn’t moving at all then I knew that he wasn’t alive anymore. I slowly turned when I heard an evil laugh the most stupidest thing that I have ever done in my life.

I was met face to face with a clown something that I hate, he was about 6’6. He had on a black pair of pants with suspenders. With a black and white striped shirt with what looks like feathers. He had a sharp grin and every time he spoke he laughed. He had a cone nose that was black and white he had silver eyes, his black hair was a mess.

“What’s wrong dear never seen a clown before.” I couldn’t move it was like I was frozen. He laughed and walked towards me, I stumbled over my feet and fell on my butt. Of course at time like this I’m like the white girls in horror movies. His claws pinned me to where I can’t move, hot tears were streaming down my face.

“W-Why?” I asked lowly. He didn’t answer he just laughed.

“You can’t spell slaughter without laughter.” He said before shoving a sucker in my mouth. I coughed a little bit, and soon the world before me was black. This is what it feels like to die. “Night night.” was the last words that I heard from my killer before blacking out.

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