The Blonde Girl: Rewritten Version

I watch her walking down the halls
I glance at her in class
I admire her features from afar
And though I keep distance cast
There are many things I'd be willing to lose
Just to hold her tight
Oh what I'd give for fee attention
To be with her one night

There are no words to perfectly
Describe her when she sings
Perhaps, like an angel signaling
The arrival of spring
Her gentle, calming voice, yet firm
Is opera to the ears
The shining star within her
Casts a shadow on her peers

I will confess my weakness
For her hair that glimmers like threaded gold
Her skin has less flaws than pure marble
Her green eyes, tiny emeralds
She was a beautiful treasure
That no pirate could attain
She was the envy of every gathering
She was that stopped my rain

Such a beautiful face she has
That provides me with such elation
Her beauty, fair, could be compared
To any Renaissance creation
She graces the stage that is her world
Like a royal White Swan
She shined her light in any dark space
As if she were the sun at dawn

Her features would have been the envy of Venus if thy did exist
It pains me that I can't touch her skin
I ache to one day feel her lips
But I could never act on thoughts
I was always in such fear
That she would cringe at me on sight
And demand I disappear

How could I dare approach her
And will myself to look in her face?
What could I possibly say to her?
Oh I'd be so out of place!
To be with her is a hopeless daydream
Even the blindest man could see
She'd never want my company
I'm a mutant to her majesty

She's the one who everyone sees
I'm invisible to all
The daydream forms a nightmare of
Pathetic love that leads my heart to fail
I must admire from afar
Like a peasant to a queen
While I know I'll never have her
She'll be with me in my dreams

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1. The Rewritten Version

I watch her walking down the halls

I glance at her in class

I admire her features from afar

And though I keep distance cast

There are many things I'd be willing to lose

Just to hold her tight

Oh what I'd give for fee attention

To be with her one night

There are no words to perfectly

Describe her when she sings

Perhaps, like an angel signaling

The arrival of spring

Her gentle, calming voice, yet firm

Is opera to the ears

The shining star within her

Casts a shadow on her peers

I will confess my weakness

For her hair that glimmers like threaded gold

Her skin has less flaws than pure marble

Her green eyes, tiny emeralds

She was a beautiful treasure

That no pirate could attain

She was the envy of every gathering

She was that stopped my rain

Such a beautiful face she has

That provides me with such elation

Her beauty, fair, could be compared

To any Renaissance creation

She graces the stage that is her world

Like a royal White Swan

She shined her light in any dark space

As if she were the sun at dawn

Her features would have been the envy of Venus if thy did exist

It pains me that I can't touch her skin

I ache to one day feel her lips

But I could never act on thoughts

I was always in such fear

That she would cringe at me on sight

And demand I disappear

How could I dare approach her

And will myself to look in her face?

What could I possibly say to her?

Oh I'd be so out of place!

To be with her is a hopeless daydream

Even the blindest man could see

She'd never want my company

I'm a mutant to her majesty

She's the one who everyone sees

I'm invisible to all

The daydream forms a nightmare of

Pathetic love that leads my heart to fail

I must admire from afar

Like a peasant to a queen

While I know I'll never have her

She'll be with me in my dreams

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