Captivated

He was looking for something he didn't know existed.
She was looking for someone to fix her.
Maybe together they could help each other along breaking rules after rules.

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2. CHAPTER ONE - What a Night

“You are such an idiot sometimes.” I laughed looking at my best friend and shook my head, Ely was in the middle of convincing me to go to a bar for the last night of he summer. “I am not going to a bar, no way.”

“Oh come on, it's our last night of summer and tomorrow we go back to school, please just this one time.” As always when he wanted something he gave me his pleading look. 

"No and besides we’re not allowed at a bar, remember I'm only 17 and you just turned 18.” 

"You can easily go for a 22 year old with that body, come on live a little.” One thing Ely was great at was convincing me to do stuff. I sighed.

“Okay, but you're paying for whatever I'm having the whole night.” Ely groaned out in excitement and kissed me on the cheek agreeing to paying for what I was having the whole night. 

“You are not gonna regret this. This is gonna be great, Louisa and Ely out for a night, who will know what happens tonight?” Ely had placed his arm around my shoulders and we slowly walked up the little trail in my backyard to the little house where my bedroom where. After my dads and I moved house, they decided that I should have my bedroom away from them and the house so they build a smaller house in the backyard for me where I had my bedroom, a small walk in  closet and my bathroom. 

“Oh yeah, I'm sure I will find the love of my life tonight.” I joked and opened the door to my room. “Okay I need to change and then I am ready.” I smiled at him and walked into my closet. 

“Would my marble crop top from Topshop work with black skinny jeans?” I yelled.

“Yes! Pair it up with your leather jacket and those black booties from Nordstrom. Oh and your studded black backpack.” He yelled back, quickly after I changed I switched my pearl earrings to my black broken hearts earrings and placed my sunglasses on top of my head. 

“This look good?” I asked while walking out of my closet and looked at Ely.

“Oh girl, if I didn't dig guys I would totally do you.” He said and gave me a kiss on my cheek.

“Oh yeah?” – “oh yes. You look hot.”

“Aw Ely, baby. If I didn't know you were gay, I'd think you were hitting on me.” I laughed.

“You ready?” He starred at me.

“Nooo- yes, yes I'm read so ready.” 

“Let's go before you change you mind.” He said and dragged me out of my room.

“Wait! My wallet. I go of my wallet.” I yelled out when we were halfway through the backyard. 

“Doesn't matter. We are going now.”

“Yes it does. By keys are in my wallet. And how would you go to the bar anyways?” I asked. 

“True. Okay. Run. Fast.” He said and I started sprinting to my room and got my wallet as well as my phone.

“Bye daddy G and daddy N! Love you!” I yelled with a smile. 

“Wait! Where are you going? Daddy G yelled. 

“Out! With Ely!” I yelled back and closed the door and ran to my dads car with Ely. 

“You seriously need to get your own car soon, we’re juniors now. We need a cool ride for school and not the bus or walking.” Ely said when I turned on the car and sighed. 

“Yeah well you try and get daddy G to agree that I can take the car for school. And besides I like walking. Makes me reflect on my day and ur makes me calm.” I said while looking in the back view mirror. 

“Yeah okay. You're right.” He sighed. “Let's just have a great night. What do you say about going to ‘Stanley’s’?”

“Ugh, do we really have to? Last time David were there and he was so creepy and disgusting.” I moaned. 

“Yes, it's the place to be tonight! All the college guys are out for their last night before they leave for college. Oh and all those delicious guys with their muscles.” Ely sounded so excited and the way he talked he sounded so dreamy. 


“We’re never gonna find a table here, this is insane!” I yelled trying to be louder than the music and all the chatting from everyone. It was packed with people. 

“So what, you try and find a table for us and I'll get us drinks.” Ely yelled in my ear, I nodded gave him a kiss on his cheek and before I knew it Ely was gone and I was starting to find a table for us. I was surprised to see that mostly guys were at the bar and not girls since most nights girls were at ‘Stanley’s’. 

“Looking for someone?” A deep voice asked being n, confused as to who was talking to me I looked behind me and saw the most beautiful crystal blue eyes and while Colgate smileC he was dreamy. 

“If someone is a table, then yes.” I laughed and tried to give him a flirty smile, but I doubt it was successful. 

“Oh then I think I already know that someone. Wanna join me and a few friends m?@ he asked and winked at me. 

Sigh, he was beautiful. 

I looked around me to try and see if I could see Ely, but he was nowhere to be seen. 

“Oh sure but I can't seem to find my friend, so I'm gonna have to pass for this one and try and find my friend, sorry.” I said with an apology smile. 

“That's okay, when you find your friend and if there's will no table available find me.” He said with a smile and gave me a kiss on the cheek, quickly I have him a smile and went to find Ely as well as a table for us. I decided to go and see if he was at the bar and I succeeded, he was waiting for the drinks at the bar. 

“There you are!” I smiled and hugged Ely behind him.

“Oh Ely, I think I'm in love.” I said and looked dreaming up. “I've met my soulmate, I'm sure of it.” 

“So I take it you met someone?” Ely asked with a smirk on his lips. 

“oh yes indeed I did.” I sighed. “He’s beautiful. He said if we didn't find a table we should go and find him and his friends.” 

“Here’s your drinks.” The bartender said and placed two drinks on the counter. A cosmopolitan for me and a sex on the beach for Ely. With a smile Ely paid the bartender and we walked away with our arms locked together side by side to find a table. 

Ely and I’s friendship were something special, we’ve known each other for our whole life, both of my dads knew Ely’s parents from High school and have been friends ever since. Ely was like a brother to me and I loved him with all of my heart. 

“There! There he is. Just look at him. Isn't he beautiful?” I asked, sighed and looked at Ely. 

”I'll give it to you, he's not too bad.” He said with a smile. “Too bad? Ely he’s… He’s beautiful.” I said and looked confused at Ely when he started walking over to the table were the guy was sitting. 

“What are you doing? Ely stop, we are not going over there.” I said and pulled in his arm to try to make him stop.

“You clearly didn't see the look he just gave you, stop being a pussy and go over and talk to him. You're clearly into him and he is so into you.” He said with a serious tone and a stone hard look. 

"No, stop. Look at him he is so out of my league.” I sighed. “Oh no, he’s coming over here. Hide me.” I said frantically and looked around the bar to find a free table. 

“There you are, I've been looking for you. Have you found a table yet?” The guy asked when he came over to Ely and me and showed us that Colgate smile to us.

“Uh…. Uh not yet, but I'm sure we’ll find one soon.” I said with a smile and looked at Ely. “Right Ely?”

”maybe, but it seem like no one is going home at any time as of right now.” Ely said with a smirk, I knew what he was doing and he was going to pay for this. 

“I'm with a few friends of mine and I'm sure they wouldn't mind if you two came over to our table.” He said and winked with a smile, I was sure if he didn't stand right I front of me I would scream out in frustration, he was perfect with those crystal blue eyes and that smile and the tan, he was perfect and it was not fair at all.

“We’d love to.” Ely said and walked with the guy over to the table with his friends and dragged me along with him. I took a sip of my drink and looked up and around to see who was at the table. Three guys other than the Colgate smile.

“I never got your names earlier.” He said and with the Colgate smile and looked at me. 

“Well this is Ely my best friend and I'm Louisa.” I smiled and bit my lip.

“Well I'm Nick and lovely name by the way.” One of Colgate smile friends said with a hint of a British accent.

“I'm Daniel, but call me Dan.” Dan said  who was standing beside Nick and the last friend. 

“Adam here.” Adam said and lifted a couple of fingers up to say ‘hey’. 

“Nice to meet you guys.” Ely said always being the friendly guy, I quickly nodded agreeing what Ely said.

“Eric here wouldn't shut up about what a beautiful girl he saw earlier at the bar and was so bummed because he probably wouldn't see her ever again,” Nick said and clapped Eric's back and I was surprised that Eric was blushing, I let out a chuckle and looked down at my drink a little embarrassed. The name, Eric, suited him.

“Louisa was captivated by your looks right when she saw you.” Ely grinned and I quickly looked up with big eyes. 

“Ely!” I said embarrassed. “You're gonna pay for this, I promise you.” 

“Thank me later babe.” Ely whispered in my ear and took a sip of his drink.

“So is this your last night here or what?” Ely asked to change the subject and looked around the guys who all shook their head.

“Well Eric and I graduated this summer and Adam and Dan is still in medical school. Eric and I are actually starting on a teaching job next week.” Nick said and sounded excited for him and his friends. 

“Cool, what are you teaching?” I asked Eric and Nick while Ely started a conversation with Adam and Dan about the medical world.

“History and PE for me and Nick is the boring kind and chose English.” Eric said and Nick scoffed and shook his head.

“Boring? Says the man who is going to teach History.” Nick laughed and Eric shook his head, I laughed at the two guys. “Right Louisa?” 

“Umm well I actually love history.” I said and smiled shyly to Eric who returned the smile and I felt my cheeks getting warmer.

“Really? What do you love about it?” Eric asked.

“That behind everything, there's a story and a history with everything and see how we have evolved from the start and to how we are now.” I said passionately and tucked some hair behind my ear and looked at Nick, who was talking to the other guys, and then over at Eric and shyly smiled to him and downed the drink and stood up from the bar chair. 

“Wait where are you going?” Adam asked confused interrupting the conversation he, Dan, Nick and Ely had about medical school, I let out  a little chuckle.

“The ladies room.” I said and walked away from the table and the guys and towards the ladies room sign and surprisingly the line wasn't as long as I thought. Quickly I peed and washed my hands, dried them and looked in the mirror in front of the sink and took a deep breath. I was nervous and I didn't know why, was it because I had a little crush on Eric or was if I was just nervous for the night.

"Okay let's do this.” I whispered to myself, walked over to the door, opened it, walked out of the ladies room and was surprised when I saw Eric stand a few feet away from the door to the ladies room with his phone in his hand and typed away on his phone. 

“Eric?” I said and my eyebrows furrowed, Eric looked up from his phone and smiled. 

“Hey.” He said, “Hi.” I chuckled and tucked a few strays of hair behind my ear and bit my lip.

“Ely said you probably couldn't find your way back, so the guys voted on me to wait for you.” He chuckled. 

“Of course.” I chuckled and shook my head. “I get lost fairly easily, so thank you.” I smiled thankfully and walked closer to him.

“Wanna go to the bar an get a drink?” He asked with his rusty voice, it never realized how deep his voice was until now we were somewhat alone, I nodded shyly and felt my cheeks getting warmer when he took my hand and I followed him out of the hall, passed the table where Ely, Adam, Nick and Dan were sitting, where Ely was whistling and the other guys came with a comment, and over to the bar where Eric ordered a beer for himself and a cosmopolitan for me. 

“So are you working or?” Eric asked when he paid for out beverages, I nodded while tucked my hair behind my ear and bit my lip.

“Uh yes at a little boutique one of my dads own.” I said with a shy smile, I was really proud of Daddy N for opening his boutique last year, it has been his dream to open a jewelry boutique and he finally did it and I couldn't be more proud of him. 

“Cool, what kind of boutique is it?” 

“Jewelry, mostly rings and bracelets.” I said with a smile and our conversation turned over to what we’d love to do after I told him it had been dads dream to open a jewelry boutique, I know I should say I'm in high school still but it's not like I were going to see him again so I decided to act like a ‘grownup’ for the night. After four cosmopolitans and two hours the bar was slowly getting more empty by the minute. 

“just one kiss.” He whispered in my ear I laughed, shook my head while I bit my lip and looked down at my hands entwined with Eric's. 

“Haha no.” I chuckled and looked in his eyes. Even when he were drunk, his eyes were beautiful and crystal blue. 

“Wanna go for a walk?” He asked after a few minutes of silence, I nodded after a few seconds of thinking and told him I needed to say it to Ely. With a big smile on my face I walked over to the table were the guys still were sitting. 

“Ely!” I said happily and maybe slurred a bit with my words and hugged him from behind. “I'm gonna go for a walk with Eric.” I whispered in his ear and giggled when I mentioned Eric.

“Be careful.” Ely said when he turned around and looked me in the eyes, I nodded. “I will.” I giggled.

“Eric, please take care of her.” Ely said looking at Eric who nodded,

“Please I'm not a kid.” I huffed and winked at Ely, “I can take care of myself thank you very much.”  I said and turned around looking at Eric. 

“Let's go.” I said and began walking which made Ely yell asking us were we were going and I replied we were going to the park. With my right arm around Eric's torso and his left arm around my shoulders we walked out of the bar and down the street over to park and sat down on a bench looking at the fountain.

“Have anyone told you you are beautiful today?” Eric asked suddenly, I shook my head and looked over at him and bit my lip. “Well let me be the first one to say it, you're beautiful Louisa.” He said looking in my eyes and tucked some of my hair behind my ear.

“Thank you.” I whispered and looked away when I felt my cheeks redden. 

“Hey, come here.” He said and took my hand, I stood up and sat down on hip lap so we were facing each other when Eric guided me over to him. 

“What?” I asked quietly looking at his mouth, I wanted to kiss him so badly.

“Come here.” He said placed his hands on my arms and guided them up on his shoulder and then placed his left hand on my back and pushed me closer to him. 

“Let me kiss you.” He whispered looking deeply into my eyes and I gave in and nodded. Slowly he got a soft grip on my jaw with his right hand and it felt like hours before our lips touched each other. I let out a quiet moan when we stopped kissing and took a breather. 

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AN/:
So that was the first chapter of the story, so sorry it's been a while since I updated but I really wanted to be happy with the the chapter and finally I was. 

So what do you guys think of the characters and chapter? Please write a comment telling me what you think of it by now!! 

If you want to see how Louisa's outfit looks you can check out my profile on polyvore it's: annaelvine

Love you all loads and we'll see each other soon hopefully!!

Xx 

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