3. extention on paragraph 2
"oh...i um really dont have clothes. i have some but not much she never took us shopping." and with that i was pulled back into the car and to the shoppin mall. When we pulled in i was quit nervous. "Are you ok laur you seem nervous?" Luke said."yea i'm fine just i've never been to a shopping mall." we walked in and i was pulled in to aeropostale, hollister,american eagle and then the swim suit store. "Please don't make me do this." "Come on hun no one will judge you" the boys nodded in agreement. "fine..." i picked out a few bikinies and one peices. I put the first one on but hesitated to show them. knock knock knock. "who is it" "it's cal can i come in?" "yea i guess." he came in and sat down next to me and said "don't think you look horrible cuzme and your other brothers think you are a beautiful person will you go show them... for me?" " sure but never again." i walked out and they all awwed me . For once in my life i felt loved.
Authors note: hey guys thanks so much for reading so far. Especially since it's my first movella i will up date every day comment any other story ideas youd like to see. xoxo