Forgetting Luke

This is a typical love story. You have the protagonist. The new girl at school who's extremely pretty and whatnot, who secretly has depression. Her name is Suzy. You have the hopeless romantic who the protagonist 'falls in love' with. His name is Luke. You have the best friend, called Naomi. The best friends soulmate, Michael. The bullies. The boyfriends friends. Just a load of friends. You have the new home, the dead family member, the 'overprotective' mother who really doesn't care. Then there's the twist. This love story isn't perfect, in fact it might be the opposite of one. This is how Suzy, our protagonist, forgot Luke. (Thanks to all of my co-authors: Suzy_Hemmings, ShortPrincessa and Emress for working with me and helping me with my very first Movella) Updates any time from Friday-Sunday (hopefully) (Outfits for story on Polyvore)


45. When the cable snaps

This is the last chapter or Part 2: Remembering Suzy It's been a long journey but its not quite over yet ;-) There will be a Part 3 out soon, but first I need to finish off the planning, update a few other stories and I will announce the title of Part 3 at some point in August I hope you enjoy :-)


Luke's Pov~

I couldn't get her out of my mind. Everyday all I could think about was her: the feeling of her hair in my hands; her lips against mine; her skin against my body. I'd never felt this way about anyone before. But enough with the cheesy bullsh!t. There was one place that I hadn't taken Susannah. It was the place where I first told her I loved her. The pleace we first REALLY connected. And guess what: it was back at school. I gonna have to do a lot to pull this off this time, then maybe I might just get my Suzy back.


I sat at the back of English class, the boring teacher rambling on and on about 'poetry' I think it was. Arthur- a guy who sat next to me- tapped me on the shoulder and said "I think she has a severe case of verbal diarrhoea, might need to get it checked out,"

I choked on a laugh, turning my giggles into coughs to avoid getting a detention. The teacher (Mr Wayland) gave me a cold, hard stare, before carrying on with whatever he was doing.

Suddenly, the classroom door slammed open and in stepping a wild Luke. Haha, Pokémon reference much. "Mr Hemmings, nice of you to jo-"

"Suzy," Luke interrupted, never breaking the eye contact.

"Hi Luke?" I said in a puzzled tone.

"Come with me," he said, holding out his hand. I ran down the isle between the desks, before grabbing his hand and running out the classroom. We giggled in excitment as Mr Wayland called after us, leaping with the thrill of, well, doing something a little bit naughty. But just before we reached the front office that lead out the school. Luke pulled me through an open doorway and up several flights of stairs.

"Where are we going?" I panted, struggling to keep up. Luke didn't say a word as he opened a trap door at the top of the stairs and slipped through. He, once again, held out his hand to help me up, which I gladly accepted.

As I stepped through the small entranceway, I was greeted with a rooftop garden, with flowers scattered on the ground and small wooden structures placed around. White pebbles lined the floor, making a circular path. 

Who knew what you could find in this school.

"This, Suzy, is the first place I told you I loved you," Luke said, not looking me straight in the eye. I swallowed gently, not daring to speak. He climbed onto the ledge and turned to look at me, finally.

"The whole school was on the field, the one behind me, and so I grabbed a microphone..." he picked one up from the floor, turning on the speaker. "and then I said these exact words." He took a deep breath, looking at the sky. Microphone raised and speaker at full volume, he opened his lips.

"You have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love..." He stepped off the ledge. "I love..." he dropped the microphone, taking another step closer to me. "I love you," he whispered in my ear, looking me dead in the eye.

As he leaned in, I placed my hands against his chest, savouring the moment.

That was until my brain just, well, filled up I guess. It's like I was the jug and my forgotten memories were the water. They were just filling me up, flooding into my brain because the dam had broken. The amnesia had gone. I remembered everything. All the cute times, the funny times with my friends, the date with Luke, the stones at my window. Prom, the stars, the angles and her. I remembered her.

"You cheated on me," I said, drawing back.

"Wha-" Luke said, confused. "DON'T ACT DUMB! I REMEMBER! I REMEMBER WHAT YOU DID! DON'T EVEN TRY AND DENY IT!" I cried, pulling my arms into my chest. Tears streaked down my face as Luke ran a hand down his face. "No no no no no no," he mumbled. "This wasn't meaNT TO HAPPEN," he screamed, falling to his knees. He drew his legs into his chest, hugging them close to his body. "Goodbye Luke," I whispered. "Goodbye forever,"


Hey guys!

I would really appreciate if you could put in some suggestions for names for part 3

It would really help

Thanks DrummerGirl xxx

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