English Transformation Drafts

This is just a collection of my drafts through the following month or so. These are the drafts that will lead up to my final transformation from my base text The Werewolf by Angela Carter. It involves witches, werewolves, and curses. I will include the plan as well.


12. Section Three - Draft 2

Her name is Evangeline I believe,
Loved by her village, treated as Adam’s Eve.
They cherished her, thanked the lord for their angel dove,
Gave her everything out of love.
Such an angel.


But she is no Gabriel,
No Michael, no Raphael.
I aliken her to Lucifer trapped in hell.
She is no angel.


Innocent she is not,
As her kindness hath rot,
Uncaring, she watched her mother’s suicide,
And when her father tried to scrutinise,
The death as murder, caused her brother,
To crucify, his soul,
As his sister played a minor role,
In the play that was her life,
Which she was cut from with a knife.


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