I'LL BE FINE

Have you ever been asked if you're OK ? Chances are you're like me and always spare people's emotions and say yes, even when you're dying inside.

Over the past few months people have been constantly asking me how I am, how I'm coping. I don't want to put on people by really telling them the truth, even when I really want to say. All of these questions have been asked me at sometime in the last couple of months, often referring to events or people.

This poem, piece of writing, is what I really might be saying if I was really being honest. If I was feeling better I may have fought more to keep the status quo. However the real me doesn't want to put on people.

I've also made a video with the two voices. I hope you like it.

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2. The Words

This is a story told in two voices and pairs of phrases. The first is inevitably what I will say, the second what I really mean. I wish I was more confident in myself to say what I really mean, but even to those I don't know that well, in conversations I rarely open up.

All of these questions have been asked me at sometime in the last couple of months, often referring to events 

Anyway here are the words

Voice One is what I will say

Voice Two is what I'm really feeling.

 

Voice One :- I’m fine

Voice Two :- I’m not

Voice One :- I’m coping well

Voice Two :- I’m drowning

Voice One :- I’ll get up soon

Voice Two :- I’m not sure I will

Voice One :- I’d love something to eat

Voice Two :- I can’t eat

Voice One :- I hate you

Voice Two :- I love you

Voice One :- I’m perfectly OK

Voice Two :- I hurt like hell

Voice One :- I loathe you

Voice Two :- I never will

Voice One :- I’ll be OK

Voice Two :- I’m finding it hard

Voice One :- I never give you a thought

Voice Two :- I think of you all the time

Voice One :- I’m fine, really I am

Voice Two :- Please help me

 

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