Story review

This is a REAL story review. I WILL be 100% honest with these reviews and I WILL be a little harsh if your story is not that good....
I will be rating the stories out of a score of 100%
My grading system will be
0-10% : Do you seriously think this is a story? A baby can write better...
20-30% : This story needs some MAJOR fixes. Your spelling isn't even the worse part of the way it is written.
40-50% : This story is not that int resting because of the way it was written., I only gotten through the first few pages.
60-70% : There is potential of this story. There are some things that need to be fixed.
80% : This story seems to be on the road of being the best story in ONE theme in Movellas.
90% : This story is amazing! There is no doubt that with this story and your writing that this story will take you places.
100% : This story is the best out of them all! Stories like these deserve to be published in real life!
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5. SUNRISE IN ASTORIA

  

When I read the description I knew that the story is going to be amazing.

Your first long paragraph was almost amazing. It was just a tad awkward on how you added your (main character) mother’s age so soon. I also love how you switch on and off with the past and present so that we can get a background story about the main character. The only thing that I would like for you to work on is what is happening in between the conversation. Does the wind blow in the main character mother’s face? Does the main character make a funny face?

There isn’t anything to really say about your story because you only published one chapter. I would love to review it more well once it has about four chapters. Until then your rate is a 65%

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