He's kinda perfect

Ellie Greene was forced to uproot her whole life and move to Sydney, Australia, and for what? So her and her family can go live with her moms new boyfriend. She leaves her family, friends, and her boyfriend to go live with a man who is conceded, selfish as hell, and just a down right asshole.
Ellie told herself that no one is as good a her boyfriend Adam, but than she finds herself falling for a boy who shouldn't even matter. Who shouldn't even had noticed her.
But out of her getting too attached she finds herself in a predicament that could change her life.

Hey :) this is my first time posting a story I've written and idk if u guys will like it but I hope u do


8. "Get here quick, it's mom, we don't know what's going on"

Six o'clock rolled around and the door bell rang. A few moments later my door opened and I saw Luke standing there with the biggest smile on his face,looking me up and down.

"You knew I was going to dress up didn't you?"  He wouldn't be wearing a button up shirt and nice pants.

"No, I just guessed that you might" He got closer to me and I felt the butterflies start in my stomach "You look beautiful by the way".

"Uh, thanks" I don't know why I'm so nervous right now. My body is acting like I haven't even kissed him before and all he's doing is getting close to me."You're not too shabby yourself" I said smiling.

"Thanks" He got even closer and kissed my forehead. Now I know I got beat red.

"You missed" I put my arms around his neck and lightly kissed him and he went along with it.

"We should probably get going" He said.


I think I'm getting so nervous because Adam has never been this romantic with me. He wouldn't go through all the trouble of just to get me out and dress up. He didn't even like spending money on me., so that's why we never went on dates either. All we ever really did was lay down and watch netflix and when nobody was home we'd have sex.

So just the fact that Luke stands up for me -something Adam would never do- loves talking to me -Adam would always make excuses not to- spent so long trying to get me, and spends money on me for no reason, just goes to show how much of a better guy he is.


We drove for about fifteen minuets and ended up at a house almost as big as Brett's "Why are we here?" I asked, it's not even his house.

"You'll see" He got out and opened the door for me (which I've never had anyone do for me before).

We walked in and it was awesome, but definitely looked like it was owned by a man in their twenties.

I herd someone walk down the stairs and it was all three of the guys.

Ashton walked up to me "May I show you to your table miss?" He extended his hand a little bit. I looked over at Luke who gave me the 'go ahead' look, so I took Ashton's hand and he lead me into the dinning room. "Your server will be with you momentarily" He said and walked out.

Luke walked in with a single black rose "I painted it black because I know you don't like normal things".

I'm pretty sure I looked like an idiot smiling the way I am "Thanks, you actually are the first guy to give me a flower". I cant believe he would act out an AHS scene for me. He can't get anymore perfect.

He sat down and Calum walked in "Here's the menu" It was a handwritten piece of paper with a bunch of Chinese food on it.

"You ordered Chinese?" This whole thing is actually turning out really cute. Adam never would have gone this far for me.

"Ya" He looked kind of embarrassed "Well you said a couple of days ago you were craving Chinese, so I figured I'd do this".

"Well I love it, Adam never would have done this for me" I don't even know if Calum knows about Adam, so he's probably really confused.

"Luke is way better than him. I kind of wish you moved here sooner so you didn't have to date that prick. You don't deserve to be treated the way he treats you and I can guarantee that if either of us ever come across him somehow, he's gonna wish he'd never done any of that to you" Calum said, so I guess he does know. It's actually really flattering what he said. It's nice to know that even the other three care about me.

"I didn't think you guys cared about me that much" I said.

"Of course we do, your dating Luke, and he's practically my brother, so your a part of the family now. Not to mention your like awesome anyway" None of Adam's friends ever liked me that much, so this is new to me.

"Umm, thanks" I said, speechless.

"No problem, so, what do you want to eat. I mean this night is about you, not your shitty ass ex" I knew he wasn't being mean. He was just trying to make me not think about him so much.

"Ya, I'll have..."I looked over the 'menu' "a couple of egg rolls, the pork fried rice, chicken balls, and some lo mein" Luke and Calum both looked at me with wide eyes, as if they've never seen a girl eat before. I have these spurts of eating, sometimes I eat like one thing a day for like a few week and than I go back to eating like this every meal. I guess I'm just weird. It might have to do with when I had anorexia, who knows.

"Damn, girl knows how to eat" Calum said "You got a good one Luke".

I laughed and than Luke told him what he wanted. I love how all of them have gone out of there way like this for me. There pulling out all the stops, it's so cute. 

Calum left the room so it was just Luke and I "So are you actually liking this date? Cause I fell like I look like a total dumb ass right now" He looked down at his fingers and started picking at his nails.

"Oh my god, you're fine, I'm loving this. I've actually only been on like three dates and they all kind of sucked compared to this" Adam just half assed our dates, but Luke has put in so much effort -along with the other guys too- To be honest, I'd rather have this kind of date than go to a big fancy restaurant, it just shows that he actually listens to me. Adam never would have remembered that I was craving Chinese one day and that the scene he acted out was my favorite from the season. 

"Really?" He looks so self-conscious . I don't get how he's so down on himself all the time, he's the most amazing person I know.

"Yes" I practically yell over to him "This date is perfect" My smile is uncontrollable at the moment. I'm just so damn happy and I want him to know.

Micheal walked in with our plates and I drooled at the smell. I wanted to just bury my face in it that's how hungry I am.

Luke and Micheal looked at me funny and I realized my facial expression definitely mirrored my thoughts. "Uhh, you ok?" Micheal asked, almost laughing.

"Ya, but I asked for white rice" I said in a bitchy common white girls voice.

"Really?" He asked with the look that he fucked up royally. It was priceless.

"No" I laughed "I'm just fucking with you cause you almost laughed at me. You should have seen your face".

"Oh, thanks" He said sarcastically and walked out.


The whole time we ate we talked about random stuff like, the weird ass dreams we had last night and a bunch of funny stories we have. Adam never did this with me. I guess he never cared, oh well. I need to stop thinking about him. It's just going to push Luke away and I can't have that. He's practically my only source of happiness right now, so I guess you can say I need him.

Luke lead me into the living room and we sat down on the couch. "So what are we gonna do now?" I asked excitedly.

"Well if it's ok with you..." He held up three burned DVD's of the new season of AHS and I died.

"Oh my god!!" I jumped a little in my seat  "I can't believe you'd do this for me. Thank you so much. I thought I was going to have to wait until it came on netflix". I lunged toward him in a tight hug than pulled away and gave him the biggest kiss.

When we pulled away he kissed my nose. "Your welcome" He smiled.

"I really can't believe you would go this far for me...and you remembered little things that I said, it's all so sweet. I hope you know I'm super happy right now. No one has ever gone this far for me" It just baffles me that he's willing to put this much effort in and the other guys too. It's not even their relationship and they're putting in this much effort. I mean, they even let us use their house. That's more than I can say about Adam and his friends.

"Well that's just me I guess" He looked kind of embarrassed for some reason "I want to make you happy like you deserve to be. You've been put through some bullshit and I want to make things better" When he said that my heart melted. That's one of the sweetest things I've been told.

"Really? Cause I mean, it's going to take a lot to keep me this way, trust me. I haven't been completely honest with you" It's sad really, I wanted to tell him, but I didn't want to push him away or have him judge the shit out of me. Adam never did, but only because I found out he was the same way.

"What do you mean?" He asked, looking a little upset, but mixed with concern.

"Umm, I have depression. It used to be severe, but my medicine helps. I was put into the phych center for it and I guess that helped a little. It helped form me into what I am now. I used to be spineless and a wicked pussy, and you know how I am now. That last part was besides the point, but I just want to tell you everything" I looked down and almost wanted to cry. I feel so bad now. I feel like I lied to him like wicked and I mean, who would want to be with someone who tried to kill themselves before.

He looked at me and grabbed my face -not hard- just to make me look at him "Ellie, your perfect and I want you to know you can tell me anything. I'm not mad at you or anything, I'm just a little upset that you didn't think you could tell me".

That's what killed me. I never wanted to make him upset, I'd rather him be mad to be honest. It probably wouldn't hurt so much "I'm sorry, I just didn't want to push you away or have you judge me" I'm so pathetic. How could he ever like me now? I'm that girl, the girl who kept a huge secret like that from the one person who means the world to her.

"Why would I do that? Ellie, I care about you a lot. That's something that I can help you through. I promise you won't ever need medicine again. I'll make you so friggin happy that you'll need medicine to not be that happy" Why is he so god damn sweet?

"I've actually had people tell me there going to try and make me happy, but they end up giving up cause they know it's useless. I may be happy some days, but than it just comes back and I feel worthless, that no one would give a shit if I died or not. That no one really cares at all. It sucks, I wish I wasn't this way, but sometimes I feel like it's just not in the cards for me" I looked down with a tear escaping my eye. Goddammit, this fucking shit again. Stop crying Ell.

"Your not hopeless at all and you know I care and so do a lot of other people, like you mom and your siblings. They obviously care a lot. Your mom cared so much she wanted to be with you here. She could have told you to stay. And don't ever say that no one would care if you died. It would kill me. To be honest, I don't know what I'd do if I didn't have you. I've only known you for a few weeks, but I care like I've known you my whole life. It would suck without you" This whole spiel is making me cry even more, even though I really don't want to. "Ellie, you mean the world to me and I'm not going to let you talk about yourself this way. Not to mention Mike, Ash, and Cal wouldn't want you to talk this way either. Believe it or not but you have a lot of people of care about you and wouldn't want to see you hurt yourself" 

I pressed my head to my knees so he couldn't see me cry "You wouldn't like me so much if you knew what I did to myself" Fuck, why'd I say anything?!

"Ell, you didn't cut did you? Please tell me you didn't, cause I haven't seen any scars" He looks so crushed and it's killing me. This is what I wanted to avoid, but stupid me had to open my big mouth.

"No, I would dig my nails into my arms till I left bruises, but that's not the worst thing" I started to cry even more at the thought so I clenched my knees even harder.

"No" He looks like he already knows and I know I just crushed his soul "Why would you try and kill yourself?" He looked like he was two seconds away from crying.

"Because I was weak" It's too pathetic to even say the reason.

"Ellie, just tell me, I wanna know who the fucker is that made you feel like you needed to take your life" Why does he assume its someone who made me feel like that? Some people just feel like that without people actually doing anything. I did at first, I realized once I started taking my medicine.

"It wasn't just a person. I put myself down more than anyone ever did. I feel ugly as shit, fat as fuck, and like no one gives a shit" That's not the only reason, but if I say why I'm gonna cry even harder.

"I know that's not the only reason" He said, seeing through me.

I paused before I spoke to catch my breath from crying "Umm, it's because I was talking to this guy and I thought he liked me like a lot, but he was just leading me on, I found out after I poured my heart out to him and he shot me down in the worst way. He pointed out that were just friends and he was just being a huge douche about it. I texted my friend Bethany about it and she was trying to calm me down, but it wasn't working. After a minuet I felt nothing, I was numb, I felt like a robot. I walked downstairs, went right past my moms old boyfriend and he didn't suspect a thing, went to the medicine cabinet, and grabbed are bottle of Tylenol and went back up to my room. My mom was asleep so I didn't have to worry about her stopping me. Once I sat back down I opened up the pills and started taking them one by one. I guess it was a cry for help in a way, but sort of not, cause I texted my friend the whole time telling her what I was doing. She tried to stop me, but I wouldn't listen, I really felt like I wanted to die, but she ended up calling the cops on me and than they called me and told me to tell them how much I took -which was half the bottle- and than they told me to give the phone to my mom. That's what killed me the most, was watching her face when they told her what I did. When she got off the phone -I thought she was gonna be pissed- but she wasn't, all she did was hug me. A few minuets later the cops came and escorted me to the hospital. It was terrifying, but they were really nice. The whole time I was in the phych center I had my friend Austin who let me call him every night before I went to bed, so it made me feel better knowing he really cared about me. He's just my friend -more like a brother- but he poured his heart out to me like he loved me. Which actually he probably does, but more like a sister, but anyway, he made everything feel a little better" I notice I ranted a little bit too much, but I had to let it all out. I've never told anyone that in as much detail as I did. I remember it like it was yesterday and I really wish I could just forget.

I saw a tear roll down his cheek "Oh my god, Ellie" He paused, trying to compose himself  "I'm gonna find the fucker who did that to you and I swear to god I'll kill him. He didn't need to be a douche about it. Did he notice how upset you were?" He asked with rage in his eyes.

"Ya, he knew exactly how upset I was. He didn't tell me not to kill myself or anything, but he just told me to get over it. That it's not that big of a deal" I think that's what killed me the most. The fact that he knew how depressed I was, but still telling me to just 'get over it'.

"That asshole, where did he ever get off thinking he could make you that upset. I hope he felt like shit when he found out what he did" I can't get over how pissed he is.

"He didn't, Austin tried to beat some sense into him, but he just didn't feel bad at all. Austin literally beat him up for making me feel like that, but I guess Collin just didn't care" Shit! I probably shouldn't have said his name.

"So his names Collin? I'm gonna go find that Austin kid and were both gonna kill him, along with Ash, Cal, and Mike" We looked over toward the door way and saw the three standing there listening in. Oh my god, they herd everything I said. Now they know my secret.

"It's already been like a year and a half though" I put my head back down.

"So, in my opinion he almost committed a murder. He made you get to the point where you didn't want to be here anymore, knowing full well how you felt. That should be on par with murder" I guess he has a point, it makes sense.

"But Austin already beat the shit out of him" I'm always going to have a soft spot for Collin, so I don't want to see him relive everything again a year and a half later.

"Well I want to now. It would have been his fault if you succeeded and than I never would have met you" True, but I didn't die, so he should just drop it, or I might cry again.

"Fine" I said in defeat.


The next half hour went by with all the guys trying to make me feel better, which was nice because I do a very good job at that by myself. Eventually they turned on the tv and we started watching AHS.

I was curled up next to Luke with Mikey next to me, letting me put my cold ass feet under his legs, although I don't think he minds, it didn't really faze him.

"Are you feeling any better?" Luke asked, kissing the top of my head.

"Ya, a little" I said with a weak smile.

"Good" He said with a big smile.

"But umm, not to sound mean, but, why are you guys here?" I asked the other three.

"Why, you don't want us here?" Ashton said, sounding kind of upset.

"No, it's not that, I do, I just thought you wouldn't want to watch this" I said.

"Well we said we were gonna watch it with you didn't we?" Calum said.

"Oh ya, sorry" I said. I totally forgot.

"Don't be" Micheal said "Just focus on being happy right now".

"Ok" I curled up closer to Luke and he kissed my head again.

Two hours later Nick called me "Ellie, you have to get here quick, it's mom, we don't know what's going on".

"What? Where's here?" I asked in a panic.

"The hospital closest to our house. We think she's losing the baby. She just started bleeding out of no where" He's wicked panicked now.

"Ok,I'm on my way" I shot right up and bolted the door.

"What's going on?" Luke yelled after me.

"It's my mom, she's in the hospital, we gotta go" I ran out to his car and got in the passenger seat with Luke right behind me and got in the drivers seat. I didn't realize it , but the guys were behind me too and they all got in back.

"Why are you guys coming?" I asked out of breath.

"Because it's your mom and were your support and you need a lot of it" Ashton said.

"Ok, thanks" I said and Luke speed out of the driveway and towards the hospital.



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