Beanie's Guide To Killing Off Characters

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2. Fang's Death

FANG'S POV

I felt the bullet pierce the skin between my shoulder blades, my wings went limp and I hurtled towards the ground at full speed wings outstretched being pulled by the force of the fall. The ground was racing up to meet me I only hoped that it wouldn't hurt for too long and that I'd die fast. I closed my eyes and braced myself for the impact, something knocked into my side with intense speed sending me hurtling in another direction but still for the ground. I hit the ground, I heard a deafening crunch and the pain shot through me like a lightning bolt and I allowed myself to scream.

 

I was writhing on the ground in agony when I felt two hands place on both of my shoulders pinning me down. I eventually ran out of breath and opened my eyes, Max was the one holding me in place, more gunshots rang out and I lifted my wings to cover her and to accompany the excruciating pain was the fact that my left wing was hanging limp from a point. At that moment my black feathers started to fall out  and fluttered towards the ground and a few were landing on Max and I.

 

"Go." I whispered to Max before darkness took over my vision and I felt everything just relax.

 

 

MAX'S POV

I didn't hear the rest because I was scanning the sky and I saw Fang, he was flying upward and he just started to drop, falling headfirst from some unseen force. My speed kicked in and I raced toward him and knocked him off of his straight drop but just sent him hurtling to the side. I quickly darted after him but I wasn't fast enough, I heard a crack rattle through my skull as he hit the ground. The scream of total agony that followed would haunt me for the rest of my life. Fang, strong and silent screaming in pain when he didn't usually make a sound.

 

When I finally landed I ran to where he was writhing and screaming on the ground. His beautiful black wing was clearly broken and his pain was clear. I was quick to push his shoulders back down into the dirt to stop his writhing and he eventually ran out of breath and opened his dark eyes and looked me squarely in mine. Gun shots rang out soaring above us, Fang lifted his wings to shield us both but he was at the point of agony where he wasn't going to remain conscious for much longer.

 

A black feather floated down onto his forehead and I tensed with alarm, his feathers where falling off. He looked up at me with a small smile and said one thing. "Go..." Then his body slackened, his wings splayed out behind him and his dark eyes glazed over with death. I didn't even bother to fight the tears as they flowed relentlessly from my eyes. I heard the rest of the flock land a few metres away. 'Is he?' Angel asked in my head.

 

"Yes." I replied as another surge of tears fell from my eyes. Angel screamed and I heard light footsteps behind me, Iggy. "Max, what's happening?" he asked softly. I didn't know how to tell Iggy that Fang was dead apart from the cold truth. "He's dead." I stated sadly. He stood in place unsure of what to do next. Nudge's wails echoed through the air as I reached out my hand and gently closing Fang's lifeless eyes with my fingertips and crawled off of him.

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