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10. One Body Two Spirits- by DHandAJ

I actually have Aspergers myself. It's quite mild, uncommonly mild- to put it in spectrum numbers I'd be a two- but I think you portrayed it well.

This is a really interesting concept, and I find some lines very moving. 

But you need to paragraph- a poem that is a chunk of text is difficult to read is a poem difficult to gather emotion from. By not using paragraphs, you're not letting the hard-hitting lines really hit home.

Grammar: 7/10.

Plot: 7.5/10.

Overall: 7.5/10.

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