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14. Immortal by Jessica Catt

This is an interesting format, and the opening is funny, but- PARAGRAPHS!

And there are some typos-

Typo in blurb: Lovesick, not lovestick.

Typo in Chapter Two, first paragraph: Obsessive, not "obessive".

Typo in Chapter Two: Electrocuted, not "electrocued".

 

Grammar: 6.5./10.

Plot: 7/10.

Overall: 6.5./10.

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