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8. Hoist the Colours- Lady Alora Wiley

Okay, first problem is staring me in the face- PARAGRAPHS!

BREAK IT DOWN, GIRL!

Think of it this way- New idea? Paragraph. New point? Paragraph? Line of dialogue? Paragraph.

Get it?

I loved the swashbuckling element of the plot, I must point out.

However, there are a lot of typos- acquaintance, and piece were the ones that kept coming up. Along with that, there were a couple of things I didn't understand, such as:

"Nero Street, named correctly, I believed." Nero was an emperor of Ancient Rome. So... Nero Street is very... Fierce?

"Severe trouble- my speciality." Yeah, I don't get that.

 

Grammar: 6/10. You're using incorrect tenses here and there, and mispelling some common ones.

Plot/Prose: 6/10.

Overall: 7/10.

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