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12. Estelle- Reine De La Folie

This seems... Different.

I love the opening- it's elegant, pretty. However, there were some mistakes.

You're using the wrong form of "it's".

"It's" is a contraction of "it is".
"Its" means, it belongs to something.

Take care with the prose- try not to make it too flowery, too delicate.

Grammar: 9./10.

Plot: 8/10

Overall: 8.5/10.

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