The Community

Albert Hewitt is fed up with his rebellious daughter Eliza. The final straw comes when Eliza gets expelled from her exclusive school. Albert has had enough. He decides to teach her a lesson. A good friend of Albert’s offers a place for Eliza to stay, a place where strict rules are in place and young women must learn their place. Albert assumes he is sending his daughter away to a finishing school. Unwillingly Albert sends Eliza into one of the strictest Cults in the country. Eliza finds herself in an unfamiliar place, with strange rules and even stranger people. She has been given a new name, a new wardrobe and strict commandments to live by. She is scared of her new surroundings, but one question remains hot on Eliza’s mind… Why her Father sent her here.
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1. A World Apart

The Two Girls

Name: Eliza Victoria Hewitt


Age: 13 summers this year
Eye Colour: Green
Hair Colour: Dark blonde
Hair Type: Straight but it looks better when it has been curled
Current Residence: Elena House named after Eliza’s late Mother. A six bedroom mansion with marble pillars and a large marble staircase, located in the outskirts of London, a large garden, with approximately 4 acres of land, it is equipped with a pool for swimming, a pond for both fishing and sailing and stables, which are the home to several show horses.
Other occupants of the current residence: Mr Albert Hewitt, a successful business man, he made his money in property and the trading of fine clothes and materials from the Middle East. The new Mrs Hewitt, Annabelle, a woman far too young for Mr Hewitt, in his daughter’s opinion. Their new born son, James, also lives in the family home. Also in residence are fleets of servants, probably more than a family of such size needs. They include a housekeeper, scullery maids, footmen, the cook, kitchen maids, valets and the Butler, Mr Kent.
Education: King Henry’s, a private school located in the heart of London, the school is an exclusive one, places are reserved for only the children on the richest and most powerful men in London. A Governess is also employed to see to it that Eliza’s education is of a high level.
Hobbies: Horse riding and swimming.
Dislikes: Anything to do with her step-mother or her step-mother’s baby, school, the Nuns who teach at the school, the other children at school, reading, writing, sewing, knitting, cleaning and children in general, especially James
Likes: Wearing fine dresses, Eliza has a passion for the finer things in life, she enjoys creating outfits consisting of a frock, accessories, shoes, a bag and deciding how to wear her hair, and then she enjoys wearing these outfits to parties. Spending time alone with her Father when he is not distracted by his new family
Religion: Her family are Church of England, but Eliza does not have time for religion.
Personality: Strong-willed, loyal, feisty, rebellious, strong, independent. 
Fears: Eliza isn’t scared of anything. Well, she’s scared of losing her Father to his new family.

Name: Abigail Mary David

Age: 12
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Hair Type: Hair
Current Residence: A beautiful home in the centre of the Community, a five bedroom house.
Other occupants of the current residence: Abigail’s Father Henry David, her older sister Eve, her younger sisters Delilah and Hannah and her older brother Marcus. There are also a few servants in residence. 
Education: Abigail will be in education for four years at Lord Antony’s School. The best school her Church permits her to attend. Her Father is an important member of the Community so she is educated along with the other children of wealth and importance.
Hobbies: Abigail enjoys reading and writing, but only in secret because it is something a girl is not expected to do. She likes making lace, sewing and embroidering.
Dislikes: There is nothing she dislikes or doesn’t like doing.
Likes: Looking after the children, making dinner, cooking, cleaning, helping at the Church, doing paperwork and reading all kinds of books.
Religion: A strict one, the only correct one.
Personality: Quiet, respectful. Not outgoing, she is very opinionated, but she knows her place and never shares them with anyone.
Fears: The outside world.

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