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21. The Albinos - Lone Soldier (In Progress)

 

#17

Dec/2015

 

Your cover is amazing!

 

I'm a nut for fantasy! Dragons are amazing and quite underappreciated. I can't comment too much on this though, as there's probably 1500 words written. 

 

I want to know though, is the entire story going to be told from one dragon telling it to his younger dragon? It's different, but I'll be turning away from it. You could write it out through the eyes of the father dragon as he's going through it.

 

So you see what he sees, feels what he feels when things happen. There's talk of a war, do you know how many amazing action scenes you could write?

 

 

Have favorited and liked because I'm very intrigued how you continue this.

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