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53. Rekindled - Pokemon_Trainor (Complete)

 

#47

May 1/2017

 

 

This poem tells a very clear story of losing the fight to move forward and still giving the drive to keep going. It's beautifully written and formatted wonderfully. The only line breaks in it are necessary to move on with the story and the theme remains the same. 

I'd like to comment though that your cover, while very beautiful, doesn't really suite the context of the poem. It strikes me more as a lost innocence vibe. I would suggest something more like a dim porch light in a rainy atmosphere. Sorta the 'ignited flame' in the despair surrounding it? The font the title is written in fits perfectly however.

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