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23. Forever Young - Le Fox Noel (In Progress)





Your cover is very intriguing! You might want to reread your summary though.



Your MC is very relatable. For someone who's been round for centuries it's a feat I didn't think was possible. 

I can't say too much as it's only one chapter, but it seems very promising. It's also why my favorite and like are staying. :-) 


I hope to see more about her story in further chapters. Also some inner monologue about her adjustment to speech, would be nice as well.




Chapter 1: 'about the way hat our society' I think you're missing a letter. 'In darker times, swhen' I'll just leave this here. 'She just sort of psycho on me.' I think you're missing a word.

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